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Please check my grammer Introduction Today, Sony invented the game machine, such as a dream. It is called the “PlayStation VR’’. The main points, “Revolutionary games’’, New technology’’, and “Price’’. This device is symbolizes the modern scientific evolution. Now, to tell you about themes in detail, my partner Keito. 2. Revolutionary games If you associate the game, machine is the essential condition. Game machines became popular until now is the Game Boy Advance, DS, and a PSP. their game machines are a typical common point. Do you know everyone? It is that there is no reality. The game will apply the word is a game. But PlayStation by Sony this time was invented is clearly different. It cited one example of a new game. New technology. Its name is the “Rez Infinite’’. Vision and hearing, and their own movement of the finger to manipulate evoke the synesthesia, is a strange experience can game. You also would have become want to play. 3.New technology It was connected to the real world and the game world. Wear a device called a PS VR in head. You can feel like a feeling of being in another dimension. It is a social revolution for people playing game. It is no exaggeration to say that most of the charm of the PlayStation VR. It is still early to prompt decision. You should hear may be the next story! 4. Price I will tell you about the price of the most annoying ones. Frankly speaking, the price is a little high, even in the game machine. But give to you the impact more than the price.PlayStation VR is ¥ 44,980 yen. PlayStation VR and set of PlayStation camera price is ¥ 49,980 yen. It has become the amount of money to buy even at the students who are part-time job. 5. Conclusion As a result, this century of Sony's invention may become a social phenomenon. Everyone is in the game that has never been experienced in the past. You could understand this splendor?I f you understand the VR, You should surely you buy it.Thanks for listening to my presentation.

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