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Last Thursday when I vacuumed a kitchen. A extension pipe of the vacuum cleaner Last Thursday when I vacuumed a kitchen. A extension pipe of the vacuum cleaner suddenly fell to my little toe. I shouted ‘ouch, Ouch” I wasn’t able to walk smoothly because of the sharp pain. It was 8:30 in the morning. I decided to go to orthopedics clinic. There were many patients , I had to wait for more than hours. I was very disappointed. After taking the X-ray inspection. Doctor told me The X‐ray shows that there is a crack in the bone of your right little toe. You don’t need to apply a plaster cast. It takes two months to heal a wound. There are no special treatments in your crack. I will give you a painkiller and stomach medicine, You should take them after the meal three times a day for a week. The painkiller is very powerful. The stomach medicine protect you from the side effect of the painkiller. I was a bad luck. I walk in an awkward way, typically because of pain from an injury. I have to careful about the carelessness. After that I went to Kariya Toyota sougo hospital to see my friends who took an operation because of womb tumor. She took laparoscopic surgery 20 hours ago, less than one day she had to start to practice walking. A nurse let her to walk with her. I think it was too early for her to move around. He had drowsy. I hope she and I have a quick recovery. Mari

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Last Thursday when I vacuumed my kitchen, the vacuum cleaner's extension pipe suddenly fell on my little toe.


I shouted, ‘Ouch, ouch!”

I wasn’t able to walk smoothly because of the sharp pain.

It was 8:30 in the morning. I decided to go to orthopedics clinic.

There were many patients. I had to wait for more than [How many?] hours.

I was very disappointed.

After getting the X-ray inspection, the doctor told me, "The X‐ray shows that there is a crack in the bone of your right little toe. You don’t need to apply a plaster cast. It takes two months to heal this wound. There are no special treatments for your toe. [ "your crack" sounds odd - and a little naughty ;)] I will give you a painkiller and stomach medicine, You should take them after meals three times a day for a week. The painkiller is very powerful. The stomach medicine protects you from the side effect of the painkiller."

I was unlucky.

I walk in an awkward way, typically because of pain from an injury.

I have to careful about the carelessness.



After that I went to Kariya Toyota Sougo Hospital to see my friends who had an operation because of a tumor in her womb.

She had laparoscopic surgery

20 hours ago, less than one day, she had to start to practice walking. A nurse had to walk with her.



I think it was too early for her to move around. She was drowsy.

I hope she and I have a quick recovery.





Mari
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Last Thursday when I vacuumed a the kitchen.

Last Thursday when I vacuumed a the kitchen. A The extension pipe of the vacuum cleaner suddenly fell on to my little toe.

I shouted, "Ouch, Ouch!"

I wasn’t able to walk smoothly correctly because of the sharp pain. It was 8:30 in the morning so I decided to go to orthopedics clinic. There were many patients and I had to wait for more than {X} hours. {insert a number}I was very disappointed.

After taking the X-ray inspection the Doctor told me, 

"The X‐ray shows that there is a crack fracture in the bone of your right little toe.
You don’t need to apply a plaster cast, but it takes two months to heal a wound.
There are no special treatments in your crack for the fracture. 
I will give you a painkiller and stomach medicine.You should take them after the meals, three times a day for a week.
The painkiller is very powerful. The stomach medicine will protect you from the side effects of the painkiller."

I was a bad luck. really unlucky. I walked in an awkward way, awkwardly typically because of the  pain from an the injury.I have to careful about the  my carelessness.
    After that I went to Kariya Toyota sougo hospital to see my friends who took had an operation because of a womb tumor. She took had laparoscopic surgery.     20 hours ago, less than one day she had to start to practice walking. A nurse let her to walk with her. In less than a day after surgery she was walking with the assistance of a nurse. I think it was too early for her to move around. He She had was still drowsy.
I hope she and I we both will  have a quick recovery.

Mari


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