When I was little.
When I was little I belived in fairys. Sometimes I stole from the kitchen food to placed in the yard hoping that could lure a fairy. Latter I started believing that sunflowers where the houses of the fairys because where I lived there wasn`t sunflower, so for me... that flower was kinda magic.
That`s why now that I am an adult, my favorite flower is the sunflower, because it remids me about my childhood and my pretty huge imagination.
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When I was little.
When I was little I believed in fairies. Sometimes I stole food from the kitchen food to placed in the yard hoping that I could lure a fairy. Latter I started believing that sunflowers where the house's of the fairies because where I lived there wasn`t were no sunflowers, so for me... that flower was kinda of magic.That`s why now that I am an adult, my favorite flower is the sunflower, because it reminds me about my childhood and my pretty huge imagination.
Muy bien Paola y una historia muy bonita. To say "kinda" instead of "kind of" is english slang and is how it would sometimes sound when spoken, but not grammatically correct. I corrected "wasn't" to "were no" but another correct way of writing this would have been "there wasn't any sunflowers". However I think "were no" is a better use of English. Adios!
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When I was little.
When I was little I believed in fairies. Sometimes I stole from the kitchen food to place in the yard, hoping that could lure a fairy. Later I started believing that sunflowers were the houses of the fairies because where I lived there weren't any sunflowers, so for me...that flower was kind of magical.That`s why now that I am an adult, my favorite flower is the sunflower, because it reminds me about my childhood and my pretty huge imagination.
Fun story!
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Hahaha thanks you Mark ! :)
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amazing story[emoji]
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