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this is my first composition i'm a chinese high school student.well, my english isn't good enough,but i love english,it's pronunciation is really beautiful i think,and i want to make more friends here, to help me improve my english!

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this is my first composition

I'm a high school student. well, My English isn't [very] good enough,but I love English [the language nonetheless] (this phrase would be better here to avoid repetition). I find it's pronunciation is really beautiful i think,and i want would like to make more friends here to help me improve my English!


pretty good over all :) just don't forget to capitalize the fist letter of the first word in a sentence as well as the names of countries and languages, as well as the names of people and "I". Also remember to put a space after punctuation and between sentences.

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This is my first composition.

I'm a Chinese high school student.  Well, my English isn't good enough, but I love English. Its pronunciation is really beautiful I think, and I want to make more friends here, to help me improve my English!

Nice job! Keep it up!

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