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Is it too late? From illegal hunting to rainforest destruction the external factors that are affecting the natural selection are innumerable. Unfortunately, it has been reported that a congruos number of animal species are going into extinction, and in spite of this alarming information not many preventive measures seem to be taken. On no account should governments ignore the issue, and instead various solutions ought to be outlined forthwith. At the present time, the support which may be provided by the Internet is crucial as there are many resources including reportages and statistics constantly consultable to contrast widespread misinformation. Thanks to this precious platform and an effective education, students should be spurred to take note of this demeaning process that is bound to destroy our biodiversity and on a great scale our ecosystem. However, to children's relief classic lectures aren't the only expedients at our disposal, but association such as GreenPeace, WWF have significantly committed to increasing awareness around the World through global projects and petitions. Equally important is the role that could be played by an accurate legislation aimed at contrasting ongoing cases of poaching. Most compelling evidence against attempted cover-ups is the disappearence of hippos, rhinoceros along with other mammalians illegally extracted from wildlife preserves. As shown above, the animal resilience is proportionately uncomprable to the force of a long series of irresponsible human deeds such as deforastion and destruction of natural habitats. Under those circumnstances though, it must be the government's duty to emanate strict laws coupled with severe penitences in order to safeguard increasingly endagered species and contrast rules infrangiments. C1, CAE Essay

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Is it too late?

From illegal hunting to rainforest destruction the external factors that are affecting the natural selection are innumerable. Unfortunately, it has been reported that a large number of animal species are going into extinction, and in spite of this alarming information not many preventive measures seem to be taken. On no account should governments ignore the issue, and instead various solutions ought to be outlined forthwith.

At the present time, the support which may be provided by the Internet is crucial as there are many resources including reportages and statistics constantly consultable to contrast widespread misinformation. Thanks to this precious platform and an effective education, students should be spurred to take note of this devastating process that is bound to destroy our biodiversity and on a greater scale our ecosystem. However, to children's relief classic lectures aren't the only expedients at our disposal, but associations such as GreenPeace and WWF have significantly committed to increasing awareness around the world through global projects and petitions.

Equally important is the role that could be played by an active legislation aimed at contrasting ongoing cases of poaching. Most compelling evidence against attempted cover-ups is the disappearance of hippos, rhinoceroses along with other mammals illegally extracted from wildlife preserves.

As shown above, the animals' resilience is proportionately uncomparable to the force of a long series of irresponsible human deeds such as deforestation and destruction of natural habitats. Under those circumstances, though, it must be the government's duty to emanate strict laws coupled with severe penitences in order to safeguard increasingly endangered species and contrast rule infringements. C1, CAE Essay

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