Love to another girl
I'm not scared about to love another girl , I don't choose it is just love , when my family knows about my inclination they got to be sad they think the society would hate me. I have some friends and they know all about me and they does not hate me. I think love is free you can love any person because to the end the real important is how many love you couple have for give you. Is interesting to write about that I know many homophobic people and when I know them I just can think they are wrong about the love concept. I need to write it my English is not improving so thank you so much for every correction.
:) Saludos y abrazos desde Colombia
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Love to another girl
I'm not scared of loving another girl, I didn' t choose it, it is just love. When my family knew about my inclination, they were sad because they thoght that society would hate me. I have some friends and they know all about me, and they do not hate me. I think love is free: you can love any person, because in the end, the real important thing is how much love you have for one another. It's interesting to write about love; I know many homophobic people, and I wonder if they are wrong about the love concept. I need to write; my English is not improving, so thank you so much for every correction.:) Saludos y abrazos desde Colombia
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Love to another girl
I'm not afraid to love another girl. I didn't choose it, it is just love. When my family learned about my inclination, they were sad because they think the society would hate me. I have some friends and they know all about me and they do not hate me. I think love is free. You can love any person because in the end the really important thing is how many love you. couple have for give you. (not sure what you were trying to say there). It is interesting to write about that I know many homophobic people and when I know them I just can think they are wrong about the love concept. I need to write it. My English is not improving so thank you so much for every correction.:) Saludos y abrazos desde Colombia
Hi Sarita, good job! Don't worry, practice makes perfect. Your English will improve the more you practice. :)
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I agree with you. :) Gay or not, rich or poor, religion, whatever... All us must to respect each other.
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