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Introducing myself :) my name is Aya! since i was kid, i have been interested in all over the world. after i graduated high school in japan, i came to university in America. i have experienced a lot of awesome things in america. there are seven months past since i came here and i wanna improve my english more and more. lets take communication! if you want, i can teach you japanese!

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Introducing myself :)

my name is Aya!
since i was kid, i have been interested in all over the world.
after i had graduated from high school in japan, i came to university in America.
i have had experienced a lot of awesome things in america.

there are seven months past since i had been camehere for seven months and i wanna further and further improve my english more and more. lets communicate take communication! if you want, i can teach you japanese!

Not bad at all~ 
私も日本語を勉強したいです!
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Introducing myself :)

my name is Aya!
since i was kid, i have been interested in all over the world.  
after i graduated high school in japan, i came to a university in America.
i have experienced a lot of awesome things in america.

there are seven months have past passed since i came here and i wanna improve my english more and more. lets take communication! let's talk! if you want, i can teach you japanese!

As for the confusion with using "had", The difference between "I graduated" and "I had graduated" depends on the context.  They mean the exact same thing, but you use the word "had" when you are referring to two different times.
Here is an example: I couldn't start my car because I had lost my keys.
Now in your case, you said "after I graduated high school in Japan, I came to a university in America."
Since you use the word "after," you don't have to use "had" because you are already distinguishing the two different times.  There is one small detail in this sentence, however.  "I came to a university in America" should be able to be a stand-alone sentence, but this sounds a little awkward.  There are two possiblilities:
1) You are out of college now and are doing other things currently.  In this case, you could say something like "I attended a university in America."
2) You are still in the same college.  In this case, something like "I came to America where I am currently attending a university."

I hope this helps and that I am not confusing you.
 
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You should've come to Canada. :P
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my university is very small so maybe you don't know... :( it's in Missouri though.
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which university do you go to

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