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How is your health? I normally work out five days a week such as a walking in the park. one of my hobby is zumba dance, ride a bicycle. and I participated in the marathon for the breast-cancer patient once a year. So I am very healthy and feel fit to fly as a flight attendant.

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I normally work out five days a week such as a walking in the park.

I work out by __________.

    I work out by swimming

    I work out by walking in a park.

I go walking in a park near my house 5 times a week to work out.

I work out five times a week by going walking in different parks. 

I work out by walking in the park five days a week.

Such as is usually used when there are multiple examples.

    I work out five times a week by doing activities such as walking in the park, bicycling, or attending Zumba classes.

You can't use "a" with "Verb+ing"

    going on a walk in the park

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How is your health?

I normally work out five days a week such as a walk in the park. My  hobbies include Zumba dance and riding a bicycle.  I participate in the marathon for the benefit of breast-cancer patients once a year. So I am very healthy and feel fit to fly as a flight attendant.
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How is your health?

I normally work out five days a week, such as a walking in the park.  One of my hobby hobbies is zumba dance., I also ride a bicycle. and I participated in the marathon for the breast-cancer patients once a year. So I am very healthy and feel fit to fly as a flight attendant.
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How is your health?

I normally work out five days a week such as walking in the park. Two of my hobbies are zumba dance and ride bike,and I participated in the marathon for breast-cancer patients once a year. So I am very healthy and feel fit to fly as a flight attendant.

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