My birthday
Yesterday I had my first birthday celebration here in Russia, Chelyabinsk city. It was really awesome. I woke up early in the morning because I had to get ready my doks for commission. My husband gave me a present (5000 rubl.) As for me it is big money, haha. I went shopping in 11 o'clock and came back at 5. I had fun. Bought a dress, cosmetics, and staff for drawing, gouache and paper. I didn't want to cook anything special that is why i bought a birthday cake, juice, sausages and 1 kilo of potatos. Fried up potatoes with sausages. Me, my husband and his brother ate with big apetite. After that my husband's other brothers came and brought sushi, pizza and Jack Daniels with Xsenta Absenta)) We danced, ate up all food and took photos. The cake with candles was great) Thanks for that day, i am happy))
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My birthday
Yesterday I had my first birthday celebration here in Russia, Chelyabinsk city. It was really awesome. I woke up early in the morning because I had to get my doks ready for commission. My husband gave me a present (5000 rubl.) which is a lot of money for me, haha. I went shopping at 11 o'clock and came back at 5. I had fun. I bought a dress, cosmetics, and stuff for drawing, gouache and paper. I didn't want to cook anything special that is why I bought a birthday cake, juice, sausages and 1 kilo of potatoes. I fried up the potatoes with sausages. Me, my husband and his brother ate with a big appetite. After that my husband's other brothers came and brought sushi, pizza and Jack Daniels with Xsenta Absenta. We danced, ate up all the food and took photos. The cake with candles was great. Thanks for that day, I am happy :)Happy Birthday, Diana!! It sounds like you had a great day with lots of amazing food and drink :)
1. Doks - sorry not sure what this is? Dogs?? Decks? Docks?! or slang for brothers? It's not common in Br.English.
2. 'I bought' , 'I fried'- we nearly always need a subject in an English sentence
3. we use 'the' for potatoes the second time because we already mentioned them before.
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My birthday
Yesterday I had my first birthday celebration here in Chelyabinsk city of Russia. It was really awesome. I woke up early in the morning because I had to get my documents ready for commission. My husband gave me a present (5000 rubl.) For me, it is big money, haha. I went shopping in 11 o'clock and came back at 5. I had fun. I bought a dress, some cosmetics, staffs for drawing, gouache and paper. I didn't want to cook anything special that is why i bought a birthday cake, juice, sausages and 1 kilo of potatoes. We ate fried potatoes with sausages. I, my husband and his brother ate with big apetite. After that my husband's other brothers came and brought sushi, pizza and Jack Daniels with Xsenta Absenta. We danced, ate all food and took photos. The cake with candles was great) Thanks for this day, I am happy.Want to progress faster?
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