What are you doing when you feel lonely?
I am a busy student. I have too much to do every day. I have many friend and i like social media. but sometimes like today i realy felt lonely. I felt i need something new, a new way and a change but i did not know how to do that. I tought with myself i runing same things every day. I was complatly frustrated.
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What are do you doing when you are feel lonely?
I am a busy student. I have too much to do every day. I have many friends and I like social media. but Sometimes, like today, I really felt feel lonely. I felt I needed something new, a new way and a change, but I did not know how to do that. I thought with to myself, "I am runing doing same things every day". I was complatly completely frustrated.0
Hi Yasamin! Nice entry. It's understandable but there was a couple grammatical and spelling errors. Other than what I put in my correction, I'd just say to remember not to begin sentences with "but". You just use that word to connect contrasting thoughts within a sentence.
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