today is a good day...
but it could be better, this morning I wake up really late after i was returned at home from an intense night of work. During the night i've had need too much coffè to resist all night without sleeping. My job is not bad, it's not perfect but i need it to bring money home. One day i would like to start my own activity with my friend. =)
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today is a good day...
but it could be better, - this morning I wake woke up really late after i was returned at home from an intense night of work. During the night i've had need I'd drunk too much coffè coffee to resist all night without sleeping so I could resist the temptation of sleep all night. My job is not bad, - it's not perfect but i I need it to bring money home (to earn money) One day i would like to start my own project/company activity with my friend. =)I was returned - someone returned you (you wrote the passive rather than the active voice)
If you write an explanation e.g it could be better - this morning...
It's better to use a hyphen (-) , rather than a comma (,)
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