My vacations
In February ago, my boyfriend and me are traveling to Cancun, Mexico, we took a bus to Playa del Carmen for one hour, the first day we visited the famous 5th avenue where there are a lot restaurants, discotheques and somethings, then we took a lot pictures, at the night we went a restaurant Italiano and we ate fish with coconut and beers are delicious! you should try them!. The next day we bought tour´s to visited ruins Tulum it´s more beautiful! you have to see!.
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My vacations
Last February, my boyfriend and I travelled to Cancun, Mexico. We took an hour long bus to Playa del Carmen. The first day we visited the famous 5th avenue where there are a lot of restaurants, dance clubs and somethings, then we took a lot of pictures. At the night we went to an Italian restaurant and we ate fish with coconut and the beers were delicious! You should try them!. The next day we bought tours to visit the Tulum ruins. It was so beautiful! You have to see it!I don't know what you mean by "somethings."
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My vacations
Last February ago, my boyfriend and I travelled to Cancun, Mexico. We rode a bus to Playa del Carmen for an hour on the first day and we visited the famous 5th avenue where there are were a lot of restaurants, discotheques and somethings many other attractions. We took a lot of pictures and at the night we went to an Italian restaurant where we ate fish with coconut and drank beer. It was delicious! You should try them! The next day we took a tour of the Tulum ruins and it was extremely beautiful! You must go visit!__
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That was a great attempt. Cancun sounds amazing!
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My vacations
In February, my boyfriend and I traveled to Cancun, Mexico. The bus trip to Playa del Carmen took one hour. The first day we visited the famous 5th avenue where there were a lot restaurants, discotheques, and some other things. Then we took a lot of pictures. At night we went to an Italian restaurant. The fish with coconut that we ate and the beers were delicious! You should try them!. The next day we bought a tour to visit the Tulum ruins. It´s beautiful! You have to see it!.0
Thanks Alexandre ! I recomend 100%
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Oh, Nice! I love travels, and Cancun is my dream, I pretend to see Cancun one day. Congratulations! I'm from Brazil. My wife and me visited Natal, Brazil. Have beautiful beachs too, worth knowing.
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