"Pedra Bonita"
On the last Sunday, me and my friends went to Pedra Bonita, in Rio de Janeiro. To arrive in Pedra Bonita is necessary to do a hike.
Me and my friends was in Ipanema and we had to take a bus until São Conrado. We got off the bus and we started our walk. After 40 minutes we arrived on top of Pedra Bonita. Uau! The landscape is so amazing!
Look the picture. What do you think? It is beautiful, isn't it?
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"Pedra Bonita"
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to Pedra Bonita, in Rio de Janeiro. To arrive in Pedra Bonita it was necessary to do a hike.*We were in Ipanema and had to take a bus until São Conrado. We got off the bus and started our walk. After 40 minutes we arrived on top of Pedra Bonita. Uau! The landscape is so amazing!
Look the picture. What do you think of it? It is beautiful, isn't it?
*or, to get there we had to hike. Your version is perfectly good, too.
Very well written!
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"Pedra Bonita"
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to Pedra Bonita, in Rio de Janeiro. It is necessary to go to Pedra Bonita in order to hike.My friends and I were in Ipanema and we had to take a bus to São Conrado. We got off the bus and we started our walk. After 40 minutes we arrived on top of Pedra Bonita. Wow! The landscape is so amazing!
Look the picture. What do you think? It is beautiful, isn't it?
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