FRIENDS OR FAMILY
Part 1: Which is more important – Friends or family?
Notes. Write about:
1. Who you can enjoy yourself with
2. Who will help you when you have problems
3. Who I prefer.
FRIENDS OR FAMILY
Nowadays, it seems that a lot of people put friendships above their families. But, the comparison between the two would be quite inappropiate, because they are both very important parts of our lives.
To start with, youngsters often believe that it’s imposible to have fun with family apart from friends. On the one hand, you can chat, travel with your relatives and feel more at ease than when you are surrounded by Friends. On the other hand, it way dependo n how open-minded is your family.
Our life path isn’t always clear, thus we ought to ensure ourselves some reliable figures to learn on in case we need help. In fact, rhe more the person is intimate with you, the better it is. No one can be purely and quickly available to you except your mother who gave birth to you.
Personally, I think that the key is balancing the various relatioships we have depending on our priorities and giving our affection to people who truly deserve it, whoever it is, a friend or a parent.
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Well written Estefania!!
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FRIENDS OR FAMILY
Part 1: Which is more important – Friends or family?Notes. Write about:
1. Who you can enjoy yourself with
2. Who will help you when you have problems
3. Who I prefer.
FRIENDS OR FAMILY
Nowadays, it seems that a lot of people put friendships above their families [I would say "put their friends above their families" OR "put their friendships above their family relationships" - either comparing people with people or relationships with relationships]. But, the comparison between But comparing the two would be quite inappropiate, because they are both very important parts of our lives.
To start with, youngsters often believe that it’s impossible to have fun with family apart from friends. On the one hand, you can chat, travel with your relatives and feel more at ease than when you are surrounded by Friends. On the other hand, it way depends on how open-minded is your family is.
Our life path isn’t always clear, so we ought to ensure ourselves need some reliable figures to lean on in case we need help [it would be more elegant to say "in times of need"]. In fact, the more intimate a person is intimate with you, the better it is. No one can be purely and quickly available to you except your mother who gave birth to you [grammatically this is correct, but as a statement it doesn't make sense... even a mother is not necessarily available to her children all the time?].
Personally, I think that the key is balancing the various relationships we have depending on our priorities and giving our affection to people who truly deserve it, whoever it is, a friend or a parent.
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FRIENDS OR FAMILY
Part 1: Which is more important – Friends or family?Notes. Write about:
1. Who you can enjoy yourself with
2. Who will help you when you have problems
3. Who I prefer.
FRIENDS OR FAMILY
Nowadays, it seems that a lot of people put friendships above their families. But, However, the comparison between the two would be quite inappropriate, because they are both very important parts of our lives.
To start with, youngsters often believe that it’s impossible to have fun with family apart from friends. On the one hand, you can chat, travel with your relatives and feel more at ease than when you are surrounded by friends. On the other hand, it does depend on how open-minded is your family is.
Because our life path isn’t always clear, thus we ought to ensure ourselves we have some reliable figures to lean on in case we need help. In fact, the more intimate the a person is intimate with you, the better it is. No one can be purely and quickly completely and immediately available to you except your mother who gave birth to you.
Personally, I think that the key is balancing the various relationships we have depending on our priorities and giving our affection to people who truly deserve it, whoever it is, whether it be a friend or a parent.
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