IELTS Essay - Cooking teaching in schools. Agree or not?
It is well known that topics like cooking or financial education to name a few are useful to survive and be succesful in society nowadays. Nevertheless, other subjects related with science, arts and language, between others, play an important role as well. It is agreed that topics that involved applied sciences and arts must be taught at school, instead of other secondary subjects such as cooking. These crafts can be well-learned at home, This essay will discuse this point of view.
Primarily, as arts in kitchen, topics like fynancial training, good manners and teology can be learned by young people at home. Tese are important subjects and parents must be responsible to educate children on these topics in order to give them tools to face their upcoming lives in community. More than “subjects”, these topics represent values. For instance, teology and religion was compulsory taught in Colombia 15 to 20 years ago. However, this topic was abolished from the primary and secondary school programs because some parents believed that this topic was intended against their principles.
On the other hand, topics related with science and technology should be strongly implemented and reinforced in schools. Nowadays, cutting edge technology is surrounding us and applied science is transforming our world everywhere. Recent studies conducted by the MIT shows that the expected growth in robotics and computational sciences students will be around 200% on the next decade. Therefore, it is required that education in schools advance across the same path as mankind does.
To conclude, crafts like kitchen and others related should be excluded from schools syllabus. The evolution of humans and technology require that schools and educational organizations focus education in science and technology, facing the new era of knowledge.
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This essay was written down in 47 mins (IELTS gives just 40 mins to do it). For that reason I believe it has a lot of mistakes. Thanks in advance for all your corrections and suggestions.
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