Please, help me with my text) I am fearing to fly. Actually! But I have to fly quite often. Our country is really big and it is different and long to get from one part of country to another. When an

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Please, help me with my text) I am fearing to fly. Actually! But I have to fly quite often. Our country is really big and it is different and long to get from one part of country to another. When an airplane is up and down, I have the biggest anxiety, because I heard some time ago, that it is the most dangerous fly time. Today I had a terrible morning. My plane was late by reason of a strong storm I'm Moskow. When we flyed I thought, all is OK. But it was not true. The storm continued and our pilot can't land the plane. He said, that the will lead to another airport. Next hour was one of the most horrible in my life. We was in the air and, I supposed, wait to a resolution to land. The sky was foggy, we can't see the Earth, the rain drops beaten out the windows. We saw a few lightings.I prayed, thought about my family and tried to calm myself. I thought really, we could die. I think, all people in the plane thought same. But in fine the pilot informed us, that in little while was the land! Then the plane was down, we was really happy! I thanked Good to help us. And you? Do you have a similar event, when did you think, that you can die?

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Please, help me with my text

I am afraid of flying, but actually, I have to fly quite often! My country is really big, and it takes a long time to get from one part of country to another.

When an airplane experiences turbulence, I get anxious, because I was told that turbulence is very dangerous. I am afraid of dying on a plane.

Today, I had a terrible morning. My plane was late because of a strong storm . I was in Moscow. When we took off, I thought that we were going to be okay the rest of the flight, but that wasn't true.

The storm continued and our pilot couldn't land the plane. He said that he would land the plane at another airport. The next hour was one of the worst in my life.

We were in the air for a long time waiting to land. The sky was foggy, we couldn't see the ground. The rain drops beat down on the windows. We saw a few lightings bolts. I prayed, thought about my family, and tried to calm myself down. I thought that we really might die.

I think that everyone else on the plane thought the same thing. Later on, thankfully, the pilot informed us that we would soon land! Then the plane landed, and we were really happy! I thanked God for helping us.

And what about you? Have you ever had an experience in which you thought that you might die?

Please, help me with my text)

I am fearing scared to fly. Actually! But I have to fly quite often. Our country is really big and it is different and long to get from one part of country to another. When an the airplane takes off and lands is up and down, I have the biggest lots of anxiety, because I heard some time ago, that it is the those are the most dangerous fly time. parts of a flight.
Today I had a terrible morning. My plane was late by reason of a strong storm I'm Moskow. When we flyed flew I thought, all is OK. But it was not true.
The storm continued and our pilot can't couldn't land the plane. He said, that the will lead to another airport. Next hour was one of the most horrible in my life. We was in the air and, I supposed, wait to a resolution to land. The sky was foggy, we can't see the Earth, the rain drops beaten out the windows. We saw lightning a few lightings.I prayed, thought about my family and tried to calm myself. I thought really, we could die. I think, all people in the plane thought same. But in fine the pilot informed us, that in little while was the land! Then the plane was down, we was really happy! I thanked Good to help us.

And you? Do you have a similar event, when did you think, that you can die?

Usually it's more common just to say plane.

Please, help me with my text)

I am fearing afraid of flying. Actually! But I have to fly quite often. Our country is really big and it is different and long far to get from one part of country to another. When an airplane is up and down [we call this "going through turbulence"], I have the biggest anxiety, because I heard some time ago, that it is the most dangerous part of flying time.
Today I had a terrible morning. My plane was late by reason because of a strong storm I'm in Moskow Moscow. When we flyed flew I thought, all is OK. But it was not true.
The storm continued and our pilot can't couldn't land the plane. He said, that the will lead we would go to another airport. The next hour was one of the most horrible in my life. We was were in the air and, I supposed, waiting for a time to a resolution to land. The sky was foggy, we can't couldn't see the Earth, the rain drops beaten were beating out on the windows. We saw a few strikes of lightings. I prayed, thought about my family and tried to calm myself. I thought really, we could die. I think, all of the people in the plane thought same. But in fine time [?] the pilot informed us, that in a little while was the we would land! Then the plane was down on the ground, we was were really happy! I thanked Good to help he helped us.

And you? Do you have a similar event experience, when did you think you thought that you can could die?

Great job, Zilya. That sounds horribly scary! I've had one similar experience on an airplane. We were going in to land and a big gust of wind tipped the whole plane sideways. It was horrifying in the moment, but turned out just fine.

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