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TEXT FOR IELTS EXAMINATION (So this a composition that I wrote for study the IELTS exam. This test featured a graphic analysing the computer ownership over 8 years ( since 2002 to 2010). ) The graph show us a percentage of people who have a computer and how this number increase in eight years. Besides it's demonstrate the possession of computer catorised by education level. As we can observe the possesion of computer had a growth in more than twenty percent since 2002 to 2010. It's an increase in almost 1/3. This can be explain by the credit failities to consumers wich occured in such period of time. Also we can see in the analysis chart the increase in computer ownership is higher with people who doesn't have a high school diploma. The same is observed with those who is high school graduate. Still, with those hadn't finished the college it was happened a significant increase (more or less 30%), but it was smaller than the lower educational levels. Already with the high educational level we can analyse a smaller increase than the others levels of education. It's seemed these people maybe have an enhanced need in their day to day. So as we can learn from this observation, there was a significant increase in having a computer, mainly within those who has a lower level of education.

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The graph shows us a the percentage of people who have owned a computer, and how this number increased in over eight years. Besides In addition, it's demonstrates the possession of computer catorised categorised the ownership by education level.


As we can observe, the possesion ownership of computers had showed a growth in of more than twenty percent, since from 2002 to 2010. It's an increase in of almost 1/3. This can be explained by the credit failities facilities offered to consumers, wich which occured occurred in such over the same period of time.


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