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My trip to Sichuan I have a trip to Sichuan last summer holiday, It was exciting. In the first day I took a huge airplane from Nanning to Chengdu and I have played a very funny video game during my flight. I landed Chengdu before sunset then I have dinner in a local restaurant. the foods are extremely spicy but I like it. In the second day I took a bus to vist pandas. I feed a cute little panda fresh bamboo and took a lot pictures with them. In the third day. It's time to go home. before I take off to airport, I bought some local handworks in mall as my gift for my family and my friends. Im so excited about this trip, it was amazing.

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My trip to Sichuan

I have  went on a trip to Sichuan last summer holiday, It was exciting. In On the first day I took a huge airplane from Nanning to Chengdu and I have played a very funny video game during my flight. I landed  in Chengdu before sunset then I have had dinner in a local restaurant. The foods are   was extremely spicy but I liked it. In  On the second day I took a bus to visit pandas. I feed fed a cute little panda fresh bamboo and took a lot of pictures with them  it. In  On the third day. It's it was time to go home, before I take off to left for the airport, I bought some local handworks  hand made items in the mall as my  gifts for my family and my friends. I'm so excited about this trip, it was amazing.

Wow this does sound like you had an amazing trip.  Feeding pandas, lucky you!

Remember when you are talking about something you did in the past you need to use past tenses.  

Louise

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