My first short essay
This is my first short essay,my English is very bad.Please help me to change，thanks.
I'm a web designer. I like painting and traveling.last year,I went to Japan，but I can't speak Japanese.Even worse, I speak English and no one understands what I say.I was very embarrassed.So,I want to learn English well.Please help me，here I thank you all in advance.
Finally, give you a pair of my paintings - Sushi,hope everyone happy.
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My first short essay
This is my first short essay, my English is very bad. Please help me to change，thanks.I'm a web designer. I like painting and traveling.Last year, I went to Japan，but I can't speak Japanese. Even worse, I speak spoke in English and no one understands understood what I say said. I was very embarrassed. So, I want to learn English well. Please help me，here I thank you all in advance.
I think you do yourself a great disservice, your English here is very good! Perhaps you lack a little confidence when you are speaking, which makes you think your English isn't as good. Some speaking practice will build your confidence very quickly.
One point to remember here, you are talking about something you did in the past, so remember to use a past tense while talking about it.
Excellent first essay and be confident in your abilities, your English is good and will get better the more you use it.
Louise
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a good essay!
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