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Letter to my USA's family Hello again, I arrived at home from USA yesterday. In the flight, provide I flew in tourist, I was able to see a film about the second world war and that did to pass the ten hours faster . I arrived too tired and I didn't answer you. I wanted to say that many thanks to you for allowing to stay in your house, you had been as my own family. I missed your meals and your speech about chemical engineering. I have learnt a lot with you. When I arrived at the airport, my parents and my sister were there. My parents were very thrilled and my sister said to me she didn't miss me, though her face didn't show it. Although, I was very tired, we went to eat to one of my prefer restaurant in Madrid. Hope you to hear news from you soon. Ivan.

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Letter to my USA's Host Ffamily

Hello again,
I arrived at home from the USA yesterday. On/During In the flight, [provide I flew in touristI don't know what this means], I was able to see/watch a film about the Second World War and that did to  helped pass the ten hours faster . I arrived too tired and I didn't answer you. /I was too tired when I arrived to answer you; I was very tired when I arrived, and I didn't answer you.


I wanted to say that many thanks to you for allowing to stay in/at your house. You had been as/were like my own family. I missed your meals and your speech listening to you talk about chemical engineering. I have learnted a lot with you.
When I arrived at the airport, my parents and my sister were there. My parents were very thrilled, and my sister said to me/told me she didn't miss me, though her face didn't show it/said quite the opposite. Although, I was very tired, we went to eat toat one of my prefer favorite restaurants in Madrid.


Hope you to hear news from you soon,
Ivan.


*Aww... this is so so sweet! Quick notes:

--> When you say "One of... [Word]" [Word] has to be plural. So "one of the houses," not "one of the house" or "one of my favorite restaurants"

-->Titles, countries, formal nouns. are capitalized. So "Second World War" is capitalized. 

--> After "that," you need a complete sentence starting with a subject, or "___". So, you can write "I wanted to say many thanks for allowing me to stay with you!" or "I wanted to say that I am very grateful to you for allowing me to stay in your house"  

--> "as" for a comparison isn't wrong, but it sounds old-fashioned [eg - you have been as a father to me]. 

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Letter to my USA's family

Hello again,
I arrived home from the USA yesterday. On the flight, provide I flew in tourist, I was able to see a film about the second world war and that helped me to pass the ten hours faster . When I arrived, I was really tired so I didn't answer your letter.
I wanted to thank you for allowing me to stay in your house, you were like my own family. I miss your meals and your speeches about chemical engineering. I have learnt a lot from you.


When I arrived at the airport, my parents and my sister were there. My parents were really thrilled but my sister said to me she didn't miss me, though her face didn't show it. Although, I was very tired, we went to eat at one of my favourite restaurants in Madrid.

I hope to hear news from you soon.

Ivan.

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Letter to my USA's family

Hello again,
I arrived at home from the USA yesterday. On (or you can say during the flight) the flight, provide I flew in tourist, I was able to see a film about the second world war and that helped to pass the ten hours faster . I was too tired when I arrived too tired and I didn't answer you.
I wanted to say that many thanks to you for allowing me to stay in your house, you were like had been as my own family. I missed your meals and your speech about chemical engineering. I have learnt a lot with you.
When I arrived at the airport, my parents and my sister were there. My parents were very so thrilled and my sister said to me she didn't miss me, though her face didn't show it.  Even though, I was very tired, we went to eat to one of my prefer favourite restaurants in Madrid.
Hope you to hear news from you soon.
Ivan.


You can also say: "I want to thank you for allowing me"  "you treated me like one of your own family" "I was so tired when I arrived, I didn't answer you"  everything you wrote is fine, these are just some other options to help.


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