My favorite---chocolate
I'm a fanatical chocolate fan! My favorite chocolate brand is Lindor.
I first tasted it when I was in Hongkong.(the picture was taken in Hongkong) A beautiful and kind lady was giving away Lindor chocolate for advertising it. My friend and I lined up for 3 minutes(very long I think) to get one packet(2 chocolate balls in it). It is really delicious. The outer part is harder and the inner part is really soft(suddenly melt in your mouth when you taste it, even close to liquid). The main reason I love it is that it has double-layer texture with strong flavor.
I really love it!
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My favourite---chocolate
I'm a fanatical chocolate fan! My favourite chocolate brand is Lindor. (see attached picture of chocolate)I first tasted it when I was in Hong Kong. Someone was promoting Lindor chocolates and was handing out complementary chocolates. My friend and I queued for 3 minutes (very long I think) to get one packet, which had two chocolates in it. It was really delicious. The outer part is hard and the inner part is really soft with a melt in your mouth experience of pure chocolate. The main reason I love it, is that it has double-layer texture with a strong flavour.
I really love it!
Hope you don't mind that I corrected your notebook piece that you submitted. I love Lindor Chocolate to and I really enjoyed your piece of writing. If ever you need help with English, please let me know, I will be happy to help you. Thank you. Bye.
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