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Studying abroad After the final exam ,my debate partner ------ Katherine told me that she would go to an international school to study .I was stunned by this .Since I have entered this school ,many of us left China to study abroad .Everyone is interested in western education system ,so am I . Two months ago ,I watched a BBC documentary .A group of Chinese teachers went to the UK to teach English students in a typical Chinese education way .The consequence indicated that Chinese education system won because of higher scores in final exams .However ,they had to stay up late in order to finish their homework and even a so-called perfect student struggled a lot to pass the strict PE test ,which means if she became a Chinese student ,she would not probably get a satisfying score in the secondary school entrance test . This is exactly the best answer to the phenomenon in our school .And it is probably why so many students in Shanghai , a city in China where students can have the best education quality ,are leaving China and even immigrate to another country with their family . However ,this brain drain phenomenon needs us to change .At the time when less students choose to studying abroad ,China itself will become stronger ,and so will Chinese adolescents themselves .

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Comment: English is not my first language but I'll try my best to correct you.


Studying abroad

After the final exam , my debate partner ------ Katherine told me that she would go to an international school to study . I was stunned by this. Since I have entered this school, many of us left China to go and study abroad. Everyone is interested in the western educational system, and so am I.
Two months ago , I watched a BBC documentary. A group of Chinese teachers went to the UK to teach English students in a typically Chinese education way. The consequence results indicated that the Chinese educational system won because of higher scores in the final exams. However, they had to stay up late in order to finish their homework and even a so-called perfect student struggled a lot in order to pass the strict PE test, which means that if she became a Chinese student, she would not probably not get a satisfying score in on the secondary school entrance test .
This is exactly the best answer to the phenomenon happening in our school.A, and it is probably why so many students in Shanghai, a city in China where students can have the best educational quality, are leaving China and even immigrateing to another country with their familyies.
However, this brain drain phenomenon needs us to change. At the a time when less fewer students choose to studying abroad ,China itself will become stronger, and so will the Chinese adolescents themselves.
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I would be delighted if you could polish my language and leave your comment since this is part of my summer assignment .:)

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