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A Scottish brewery, please correct!!! As part of my personal challenge, #12months12breweries, in May I had the opportunity to visit one of my favorite Scotish breweries: Fyne Ales. Located in Cairndow, close to the Highlands, this brewery presumes to have one of the best waters in the UK. If you don't drive you can get by bus and then walk around 10 minutes. We can divide the area into three parts: the tap room, the old brewery, and the new brewery. We arrived soon, so we decide to start tasting somfyneales_yeastfermentatione beers before to star the brewery tour. The brewery tap opens 7 days a week and there you can find around 5 cask and 3 kegs of fresh Fyne Ales beers. We were lucky and the sun rises in Scotland and gives us the opportunity to enjoy the beers outside in the courtyard. We got hungry soon and we didn't miss the chance to try some local food like the steak pie. Then, we some beers already in me its time to do the brewery tour. We visited first the old brewery. The old brewery is built in an old farm building where the farmers milk cows but since 2000, this building is being used to brew. The first beer that Fyne Ales was the Highlander. A Scottish ale with British and American hops. Now, the old brewery is used to small batches, collaborations or tests. We could see how the yeast was eating sugars in one of the open fermentation vessels. Once we finish visiting the old brewery we pass to the new building to see the new brewery. I was surprised how bit it was, to be honest. For a brewery where you can't find their beers easily even in the North of England, I thought that was too big. The new brewery was very clean, order and beautiful. One thing that is usually in other breweries is the bottle/can line. I thought that a brewery like Fyne Ales had their own bottle line but actually, they send the beer to be bottled. During the tour, they explained some details as the quality control test that they do, the refrigeration, the ingredients for the beer or some collaborations that they are doing, like De Molen or Magic Rock. If you go to Scotland and like good ales, you should stop at Fyne Ales and if you go around June/July you probably will have the opportunity to go to the Fyne Fest, a beer, food and music festival in a privileged area.

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 Scottish brewery, please correct!!!

As part of my personal challenge, #12months12breweries, in May I had the opportunity to visit one of my favorite Scottish breweries: Fyne Ales. Located in Cairndow, close to the Highlands, this brewery presumes (or claims) to have one of the best waters in the UK. If you don't drive you can get there by bus and then walk around 10 minutes. We can divide the area into three parts: the tap room, the old brewery, and the new brewery. We arrived soon early, so we decided to start tasting some Fyne ales yeast fermentation beers before to star starting the brewery tour. The brewery tap opens 7 days a week and there you can find around 5 casks and 3 kegs of fresh Fyne Ales beers. We were lucky and the sun rises early in Scotland and gives us the opportunity to enjoy the beers outside in the courtyard. We got hungry soon and we didn't miss the chance to try some local food like the steak pie. Then, we with some beers already in me it was time to do the brewery tour. We visited first the old brewery. The old brewery is built in an old farm building where the farmers milk cows but since 2000, this building is being used to brew. The first beer that Fyne Ales made was the Highlander. A Scottish ale with British and American hops. Now, the old brewery is used to for small batches, collaborations or tests. We could see how the yeast was eating sugars in one of the open fermentation vessels. Once we finished visiting the old brewery we passed (or crossed) to the new building to see the new brewery. I was surprised how bit big it was, to be honest.


What a beautiful location! Corrections in red and suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

"one of the best waters in the UK" - It would sound more natural to say either:

Some of the best water in the UK

One of the best water supplies in the UK

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For a brewery where you can't find their beers easily even in the North of England, I thought that was too big. The new brewery was very clean, orderly and beautiful. One thing that is usually in other breweries is the bottle/can line. I thought that a brewery like Fyne Ales had (better: would have) their own bottle (or bottling) line but actually, they send the beer to be bottled. During the tour, they explained some details as of the quality control test that they do, the refrigeration, the ingredients for the beer or some collaborations that they are doing, like De Molen or Magic Rock.


If you go to Scotland and like good ales, you should stop at Fyne Ales and if you go around June/July you probably will have the opportunity to go to the Fyne Fest, a beer, food and music festival in a privileged (special??) area.


I had to correct this in two parts due to a bug in italki.

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