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Interpersonal Communication with My Mom In this paper, I would like to talk about the relationship between my mom and me. She plays lots of crucial roles in my life, my caregiver, my teacher, and my family. I love her as much as she loves me. We talk a lot, or saying that we interpersonal communicate a lot. We share and talk about so many stuffs, like feelings, the recent updates, the lectures she wants me to learn and thought that would give me profound influence, and quarrels occasionally. Even there is physical long distance, online message and FaceTime made it happen. I never think that my mom is a competent communicator, and neither am I. Of course, she loves me, but in a wrong way to communicate. She shows less support or positive influence. I don’t think that I’m the kind of kid who can find the best self from criticism. What I need is caring and support, which helps me achieve my goal and release my pressure. Sometimes, her words are hurt, which like a stone prevent me bouncing back from failures. I also need some improvements in interpersonal communication. I’m stubborn for the things I think are right. I will become inpatient if my mom doubts me.

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Interpersonal Communication with My Mom

In this paper, I would like to talk about the relationship between my mom and me. She plays lots of crucial roles in my life, as my caregiver, my teacher, and my family member. I love her as much as she loves me. We talk a lot. We share and talk about so many things, like feelings, the recent updates, the lectures she wants me to learn thinking it would give me profound influence, and quarrels occasionally. Even though there is physical long distance, online message and FaceTime made it happen. I never thought that my mom is a competent communicator, and neither am I. Of course, she loves me, but does not communicate it. She shows less support, or positive influence. I don’t think that I’m the kind of kid who can find the best self from criticism. What I need is caring and support, which helps me achieve my goal and release my pressure. Sometimes, her words hurt me, which like a stone prevent me bouncing back from failures. I also need some improvements in interpersonal communication. I’m stubborn for the things I think are right. I will become inpatient if my mom doubts me.
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Interpersonal Communication with My Mom

For this paper, I would like to talk about the relationship between my mom and me. She plays many crucial roles in my life: she is my caregiver, my teacher, and a core part of my immediate family. I love her as much as she loves me. We talk a lot to each other;  by that I am  or saying that we have a lot of interpersonal communication . We share and talk about (so) many stuffs, such as our feelings, the recent happenings, and the lectures that she wants me to attend , those she thought that would have a positive influence on me. But we do quarrel occasionally.

Even there is physical long distance, online message and FaceTime made it happen. ????

I don't think (that )my mom is a competent communicator, and neither am I. Of course, she loves me, but the way she shows it to me is wrong. She shows little understanding and support. I don’t think (that) I’m the kind of kid who can realise my true potential through constant nagging. What I need from her is the caring emotional support that can help me achieve my goal without being stressed. Sometimes, her words can hurt, which so much so that I am like a person being prevented from bouncing back from failures. I also need to improve on my interpersonal communication skills. I’m stubborn when I think whatever I do is right. I will become irritated whenever my mom doubts me.

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