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Everything's coming up roses. I'm so happy every day because I have a job, family, friends and a boyfriend. Besides I'm healthy. I'd like to thank more about usual things.

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This is almost perfect!

Everything's coming up roses.

I'm so happy every day because I have a job, family, friends and a boyfriend.
Besides, I'm healthy.
I'd like to thank more about usual things.

The last sentence is unclear. Do you mean, "In the future I want to be more thankful for all the everyday things" or "I like (now) to be thankful about everyday things"?

"Be more grateful" is a good expression. "Grateful"が形容詞です、"being thankful" という。

"Usual things" are regular things? Like health, boyfriend, etc.?

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Everything's coming up roses. Everything is rosy! 

I'm so happy every day because I have a job, family, friends and a boyfriend.
Besides, I'm healthy.
I'd like to thank more about usual things. This doesn't quite make sense in English. I think you mean: I am grateful for all the small things in life.
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Everything's coming up roses.

I'm so happy every day because I have a job, family, friends and a boyfriend.
Besides I'm also healthy.
I'd like to thank more about usual things.[1]


Notes: Good for you that you're so happy! 

[1] Although this (sort of) makes sense in English, perhaps this is a phrase that is directly translated from Japanese to English? Try to look around for another phrase that fits your feeling. 

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Everything's coming up rosy

I'm so happy every day because I have a job, family, friends and a boyfriend.
Besides, I'm healthy.
I'd like to be thank more thankful for about usual all the small things.

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Or　You can say 今回のノートはよかったです。　in this case you don't need to say pronouns.ありがとう！！ スティーブも素敵な週末を過ごしてくださいね！

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