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Autonomous car This time I would like to write above the future. Currently spanish newpapers are writting above autonomous car, the new technology that it'll change the world that we know. They are focusing in ethical problems like "If you go on an autonomous car with your grandfather, a child cross your path and the car can't turn without kill to someone, Who do the car have to kill to?". Does the newspaper want that people have a bad opinion about them?. I think that technology is ready to real life but it has two problems named the unemployment and private property. What is your opinion?

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Autonomous car

This time I would like to write above the future.

Currently spanish newpapers are writting about the autonomous car, the new technology that will change the world that we know. They are focusing on  ethical problems like "If you use an autonomous car with your grandfather, a child might cross your path and the car can't turn without killing someone.  Does the newspaper want, that people have a bad opinion about them?.

I think that technology is ready for real life but it has two problems named the unemployment and private property. What is your opinion?
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Autonomous car

This time I would like to write above about the future.

Currently, Spanish newpapers are writting about autonomous car (you could write: about the autonomous car or: about autonomous cars), the new technology that it’ll will change the world that we know (or: as we know it). They are focusing in on ethical problems like, "If you go on an autonomous car ride with your grandfather and a child crosses your path and the car can't turn without killing (better: hitting) to someone, who do the car have to kill to?” (perhaps you could replace this last part with, “how do you chose whom to hit? or: “how can the car chose whom to hit?”) Does the newspaper want that people have a bad opinion about them autonomous cars?.  (if you end this question with “about them,” the “them” refers to the newspaper and I believe your intent is to ask about autonomous cars).

I think that technology is ready to for real life but it has two problems named the unemployment and private property. What is your opinion?

Interesting notebook entry Marco.  You write well.  I recommend that you divide complex sentences into shorter sentences, if possible.  For example, when you wrote, “They are focusing in ethical problems like “If you go on an autonomous car with your grandfather, a child cross your path and the car can’t turn without kill to someone, Who do the car have to kill?” you might want to consider writing it as, “They are focusing on ethical problems.  What if you go on an autonomous car ride with your grandfather and a child crosses your path?  If the car cannot avoid the child without injuring someone else, what will you do?”  

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Gracias por tu ayuda.
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This time I would like to write above the future.

I think that technology is ready for real life but it has two problems, unemployment and private property. What is your opinion?

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