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My favorite TV show
A few years ago, to improve my level of listening, l started to watch Vampire Diaries. It's so wonderful so that I will never be able to forget it. I think these stars are good at acting. Because of them, I continue to watch it.
I like Damon, he is so cute and cool, and he has native. He knows should what to do, how to do it, and whatever Elena has to change, he still loves her.
And I like Stafen too. He is full of loving. Kind, handsome. If he realises he was wrong, he feels so guilty, and he is a good man. He also likes to help others. It's very safe to stay with him.
As for Elena, she is kind, but sometimes she is hard. She lost her parents when she was a high school student,and her aunt also died, but she's strong, and many people love her.
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Hi Julia. I've marked spelling, grammar and punctuation corrections in yellow, phrasing adjustments in blue, vocabulary corrections in magenta, and where the meaning is unclear, I marked it in cyan.
Remember, always capitalise the word "I". Always capitalise people's names.
I'm not sure what you meant when you wrote "he has native". Did you mean he is a native, as in an indigenous person? Or did you mean he has good intuition?
Always leave a space after a comma or fullstop.
In informal writing, such as texting a friend or sending a message on Facebook, it's acceptable to link sentences together with commas. However, with anything more formal than that, it's best to separate sentences with fullstops, as very long sentences can make things difficult to read. When you're reading a book or article, pay attention to where sentences end and begin.
Have a good day!
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