Lord Of The Rings - retelling of chapter 1
This is my retelling of a part of the chapter from Lord Of The Rings. The first chapter is called "A long-expected party" and describes the celebration of Bilbo Baggins 111 years old.
The first part center of preparations, errands and invitation letters.
And the next part is dedicated to the celebration itself.
There was a large tent built in the middle of the field. It was so enormous that it was over a tree and covered it. Lots of flags were unfurled.
When the party had began Gandalf started to make fireworks. There were plenty of them and all of a different kind: scintillating, loud, sparkling. They all were superb. And finally there was a rocket which represented the dragon that had been defeated by Bilbo in his previous adventure.
After the show the time passed to make a speech. Bilbo got on the stage and started with greetings of his relatives and other guests. Everyone expected a short introduction but it lasted too long and some phrases were too difficult to understand (because hobbits were quite simple and straightforward people and at that precise moment they were slightly drunk ))) )
Eventually he made an accent (or an announcement) that it was "the end". He stepped down and put on the magic ring which he held in his pocket all this time and disappeared.
Everyone was shook and kept silence for a while. And than all began to talk at once discussing this miracle.
When invisible Bilbo got home and took off his ring he become visible again and was met by Gandalf. They held a talk, said good-bye to each other and Bilbo set off to his last journey to the town of elves where he wanted to finish writing his book.
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Lord Of The Rings - retelling of chapter 1
This is my retelling of a part of the chapter from Lord Of The Rings. The first chapter is called "A long-expected party" and describes the celebration of Bilbo Baggins 111th birthday 111 years old.The first part center focuses on the preparations, errands and invitation letters.
And the next part is dedicated to the celebration itself.
There was a large tent built set up in the middle of the field. It was so enormous that it was placed over a tree and completely covered it. Lots of flags were unfurled.
When the party had began Gandalf started to make light fireworks. There were plenty of them and all of a them were different kind: scintillating, loud, and sparkling. They all were superb. And finally there was a rocket which resembled the dragon that had been defeated by Bilbo in his previous adventure.
After the show the time passed came for Bilbo to make deliver a speech. Bilbo got on the stage and started by greeting of his relatives and the other guests. Everyone expected a short introduction but it lasted too long and some phrases were too difficult to understand (because hobbits were quite simple and straightforward people and at that precise moment they were slightly drunk ))) )
Eventually he made an accent (or an announcement) that it was "the end". He stepped down and put on the magic ring which he held had been holding in his pocket all this the entire time and disappeared.
Everyone was shook shocked (surprised, shaken up) and kept silence remained silent for a while. And than all of them began to talk at once discussing this miracle.
When invisible Bilbo got home and took off his ring he become visible again and was met confronted by Gandalf. They held a talk talked for a bit, said good-bye to each other and Bilbo set off to his last journey to the town of elves where he wanted to finish writing his book.
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