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I returned home last Saturday at home after a week in Tenerife.It was great because the weather was so hot and the ocean water was fresh. Also, we went up to the Teide and we could see a spectacular sky with the moon and the stars.
We went to an aquactic park and we spent around 8 hours there enjoying the huge slides.
But now, I´m at home preparing myself for a hard day of work. I have to set aside my vacation memories and return to my job. It´s hard but I have to remember that in October, we will travel again.
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I came back home last Saturday at home before after a week in Tenerife.
It was great because the weather was very so hot and the water of the ocean was fresh. Also, we went up on to the Teide and we could see a spectacular sky with the moon and the stars.
We went to an aquatic park and we spent around (eight) 8 hours there by sliding down throwing for huge slides.
But now, I´m at home, preparing myself to for a hard day of work. I have to set aside this holiday and return to my job. It´s hard but I have to think that in October, we will travel again.
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I came back home last Saturday at home before after (spending) a week in Tenerife.It was great because the weather was so hot and the water of the ocean (ocean water) was cool (1). Also we went up to the Teide and we could see a spectacular sky with the moon and the stars. (Also, we climbed Mount Teide and saw a spectacular starry sky with a full moon.)
We went to an aquactic park and we spent around 8 hours there by throwing for sliding down huge slides.
But now, I'm at home preparing myself for a hard day of work. I have to set aside this holidays and return to my job. It's hard, but I have to think that in October, we will travel again.
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(1) fresco = cool when talking about liquids
The purple text is suggestions for sounding a little more natural.
Thanks for sharing! Nature-based trips like the one you describe are almost always an amazing experience. Particularly those the involve tall mountains or volcanoes. The verdant landscapes, crisp mountain air, and astonishing soaring views definitely leave a lasting impression.
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