A film "Requiem for a Dream"
A long time ago I heard about this film. I read a lot of good reviews about it. Few days ago I want to watch some film with my husband. I enjoy watching melodramas, historical and fantasy films.
We decided to watch this film.
When I was seeing this film, I was undestanding - I don't like it!
But I can't turn off it and go out a screen.
It was a terrible film. After a watching, I couldn't sleep, I thought about its characters.
These horrible scenes stay in my head. Now I am supposing, how much good reviews has it!
I think it needs to make good movies to make people better.
This film, I suppose, makes people worse - they can see a cruelity in other people and can would be same.
I think some teeneger can interesent drugs and cool life of bad guys.
I really consider, that a lot of world bad things from a unnecessary knowledge.
Children know a lot of things , which they must not know so early about a weapon, a sex, a violence.
What do you think about this film?
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A film "Requiem for a Dream"
A long time ago I heard about this film. I read a lot of good reviews about it. A few days ago, I wanted to watch some film with my husband. I enjoy watching melodramas, historical and fantasy films.We decided to watch this film.
When I was watching this film, I made a conclusion: I don't like it!
But I can't turn it off. (I failed to understand what you want to say on the second part so I just cut it out)
It was a terrible film. After a watching it, I couldn't sleep, I thought about its characters.
These horrible scenes stay in my head. Now I am wondering, how did it get good reviews?
I think we need to make good movies to make people better.
This film, I suppose, might make people worse - they can see cruelty towards other people and they might do the same.
I think that it could lead some teenagers to be more interested in drugs and the cool life of the bad guys.
I really think/believe ("consider" would be a little misuse here ) that a lot of the world's (should be possessive) bad things came from these unnecessary knowledge.
Children learn a lot of things from it, which they should have not known so early like weapons, sex, and violence.
What do you think about this film?
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A film "Requiem for a Dream"
A long time ago, I heard about this film. I read a lot of good reviews about it. A few days ago, I wanted to watch a movie/film with my husband. I enjoy watching melodramas, historical and fantasy films.We decided to watch this film.
When I was watching this film, I was understanding ??? - I don't like it!
But I can't turn off it and go out a screen.X > But I could not stop myself from watching and changed it to another movie.
It was a terrible film. After watching it , I couldn't sleep. I thought about the characters in the movie.
Those horrible scenes stayed in my head.
Now I am supposing, how much good reviews has it! X > Now I am wondering how this movie can have such good reviews from others.
I think it needs to make good movies to make people better.??? > I think a good movie should make the audience feel better
This film, I think, makes people feel worse:
they can see a cruelity in other people and can would be same??.> there are too many cruelties shown in this film
I think some teeneger can interesent drugs and cool life of bad guys.???
I really consider, that a lot of world bad things from a unnecessary knowledge. ??
Children know a lot of things , which they must not know so early about a weapon, a sex, a violence.
> Children should have knowledge but not on sex , violence or guns , when they are still young .
What do you think about this film?
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