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About the film Recently, my partner and I are planning to shoot a stop- motion film. The concept is the distance among the rich , the middle class and the poor. We are going to combine different folded newspaper and animation to complete the film. The reason why we choose the topic is because it is close to ourselves experiences. Since we were child, we are taught to work hard then we can be like the "rich", "successful" people. However, no matter how hard we work , how many times we work overtime , we can't be like them. Because we are working under the big fracture they built. We think the word — "hard" here is blinded. It sound pessimistic. So we are working on the topic now. to be continue...

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About the film:

Recently, my partner and I are planning to shoot a stop motion film.
The concept is about the distance among between the rich , the middle class, and the poor.  We are going to combine different folded newspapers and animation in order to complete the film.

The reason why we choose the this topic is because it is close to ourselves our own experiences.
Since we were children, we are were taught to work hard. then Then we can become like the those "rich and successful" "rich", "successful" people. However, no matter how hard we work , or how many times we work much overtime we work, we can't become like them. Because because we are working under the big fracture they built. (Fracture?) 

We think the word "hard" here in this context is blindedmisleading.  It sounds pessimistic, so we are working on the topic now.

to To be continued...

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