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My old TV When I was about 7 years old, my parents bought a black and white TV, which is very important to us because in the past it made my childhood life more memorable and now it brings back memories. It is pretty outdated in appearance. Its 17-inch screen is convex, while its shell, made of plastic, was off-white. You can also see several rotary knobs on its right side. In spite of this, it was very popular during the first few years after it was first bought. On scorching summer days, my father would always move it from the living room to the corridor, so that more neighbors could watch it. There were just a couple of TVs in my neighborhood, so dozens of childhood friends came around to my place to watch it. We talked about the programs that were being showed; we had a lot of fun. Yes, that is the TV which added spice to my early years. A few years ago, we bought a new TV, and of course we don’t use the old one as much as we used to do. I only turn on it from time to time to reminisce about the days I spent being with my little friends.

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My old TV

When I was about 7 years old, my parents bought a black and white TV, which is very important to us because in the past it made my childhood life more memorable and now it brings back memories.
It is pretty outdated in appearance. Its 17-inch screen is convex, while its shell, made of plastic, was off-white. You can also see several rotary knobs on its right side.
In spite of this, it was very popular during the first few years after it was first bought. On scorching summer days, my father would always move it from the living room to the corridor, so that more neighbors could watch it. There were just a couple of TVs in my neighborhood, so dozens of childhood friends came around to my place to watch it. We talked about the programs that were being showned; we had a lot of fun.
Yes, that is the TV which added spice to my early years. A few years ago, we bought a new TV, and of course, we don’t use the old one as much as we used to do. I only turn on it from time to time to reminisce about the days I spent being with my little friends.


**Notes: "...being showed;..." was the incorrect verb form of the continuous tense and "...of course..."  was missing a comma after the introductory phrase but in all, pretty good and I like the story!**

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