The Climbing how The live
I'm do a rock climbing. I think that the climbing the most unpredictable sport. Every time when you see the new route the new goal and begin to move it, you don't know what are you waiting for in the way. This reminds me of the flow live. In our lives we meet obstacles like on the route of rock that we to overcome, but won yourself fear and done few bad try we finally win and happy climb down a rope.
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The Climbing how The live
I'm do a I do rock climbing. I think that the climbing is the most unpredictable sport. Every time when you see the a new route it is the a new goal and you begin to move towards it. You never don't know what is awaiting you. are you waiting for in the way. This reminds me of the flow of life live. In our lives we meet obstacles much like when you rock climb on the route of rock that we have to overcome, but won yourself if you overcome fear and done few bed try you can finally win feel successful and happy to climb down the rope.Hey Vasily! I don't understand the bits in red, at all.
It might be worth trying to write in English about other areas of life. The way you are trying to write is very metaphorical which is nice..but I don't think it's an easy thing to do without understanding the way sentences are formed. First, work on your sentence structure..and then you can start to think more in an abstract way.
Good luck!
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