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my first try Hey everyone, I have known Italki for a long time, but this is acually the first time I try to make it useful for me. I am learning French now, but I am just a beginner. I think the hardest part of learning Frech is you have to remember so many new words, and I have to say I am really not good at grammar, even for Chinese, which is my native language. I am a colledge stdent now and next year will be my last year in university, I have a lot of spare time. So I hope I can make a good use of my time and make a big progress in leaning French, and I am also glad to offer help if you are learing Chinese, my English is not good enough, but if you guys want to talk to me, I think I can get what you mean. So welcome to all my friends to be. So... my French part... it is embarrassing. Bonjour, mon amis. Je m'appelle Xia Yuemei, et je suis Chinoise. J'ai 21 ans. J'aime la musique, le film et le sport. Ma amies et moi faisons des courses souvent, on va des restuarants, des magasins et des supermarchés. J'ai acheté la robe rough, c'est très joli. That is all I can spell, it takes me a lot of time cause I can not remember the spelling, so I have to look up my textbook often. By the way, I like watching football games, my favourite player is Mesut Özil.

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my first try My First Try

Hey, everyone. I have known Italki for a long time, but this is actually the first time I am trying to make it useful for me. I am learning French now, but I am just a beginner. I think the hardest part of learning French is you have to remember so many new words. and I have to say I am really not good at grammar, even for in Chinese, which is my native language.
I am a colledge student now and next year will be my last year in university. I have a lot of spare time. So I hope I can make a good use of my time and make a big progress in learning French. and I am also glad to offer help if you are learning Chinese. my My English is not good enough, but if you guys want to talk to me, I think I can get what you mean. So, welcome to all my friends to be.
So... my French part... it is embarrassing.
Bonjour, mon mes amis. Je m'appelle Xia Yuemei, et je suis Chinoise. J'ai 21 ans. J'aime la musique, le film, et le sport. Mes amies et moi faisons des courses souvent, on va des restaurants, des magasins, et des supermarchés. J'ai acheté la robe rough, c'est très jolie.
That is all I can spell. It takes me a lot of time because I can not cannot remember the spelling, so I have to look up the words in my textbook often.
By the way, I like watching football games. My favourite player is Mesut Özil.
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你的句恨好。Watch the spelling and maybe try to make the sentences shorter, keeping a single thought in each sentence. As far as the French goes, remember that the plural and gender should match. I know you are talking about your friends who are girls, but the plural is always "mes". Same with describing the dress. "Jolie" should be the feminine form of the adjective. =)

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