July 13th, Wednesday.2016
Recently, my health went from bad to worse. Maybe that was because the weather was hot and I always stayed up late. I felt tired easily. And I couldn't eat anything in the evening. However , I couldn't fall asleep at night. I felt nervous . But I didn't know why. Everything was bad.
To solve the problems , I decided to see a doctor the day after tomorrow. And I am going to getting over the bad habits. I won't stay up late and I will exercise more. I hope that everything will be better.
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July 13th, Wednesday.2016
Recently, my health went from bad to worse. (1) Maybe that's because the weather has been hot and I always stayed up late. And I can't eat anything in the evening. I feel tired easily, but I can't fall asleep at night. (2) I feel nervous, but I don't know why. Everything is bad.To solve the problems, I have an appointment to see a doctor the day after tomorrow. And I am going to getting over the bad habits. I won't stay up late and I will exercise more. I hope that everything will be better.
(1) I have changed the tenses for most of this entry. Since you are seeing a doctor in two days, I am assuming these problems are still the case. If they are not, then don't worry about the changes in verb tense that I made.
(2) I moved "I feel tired easily" next to "I can't fall asleep at night" because you used the conjunction "However". With an unrelated thought in between them - not eating in the evening has nothing to do with why you can or can't sleep - the "however" made no sense. I've also changed the "however" to a "but". It's more natural in this context.
Feel better!
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Yes. You should do more exercise.
Have a good rest tonight.
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