Chat with my little sister
回家的路上
我:刚才的动画片怎样?
妹妹:超级搞笑哇,里面的音乐也挺好听的,你感觉咧?
我:嗯,哥哥觉得吧,还有一点感动
妹妹:只是很好笑啊,哪里有什么感动了?
我:因为它讲了一个关于理想和热爱的故事。
妹妹:嗯…什么是理想和热爱啊?
我:等你到哥哥这么大的时候就能明白了。
妹妹:额…好的吧。
----摇滚藏獒
on the way go back home
me:what do you think about this animated flim?
sis:so funny,and the music inside is very nice,what about you?
me:well,i think,also a little touched my heart
sis:just funny,where is touched?
me:because it is a story about personal dream and deep love
sis:eh…what‘s the meaning of the persnal dream and deep love?
me:you will understand it when you grow up as old as me
sis:eh…well
----Rock Dog
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Chat with my little sister
回家的路上我:刚才的动画片怎样?
妹妹:超级搞笑哇,里面的音乐也挺好听的,你感觉咧?
我:嗯,哥哥觉得吧,还有一点感动
妹妹:只是很好笑啊,哪里有什么感动了?
我:因为它讲了一个关于理想和热爱的故事。
妹妹:嗯…什么是理想和热爱啊?
我:等你到哥哥这么大的时候就能明白了。
妹妹:额…好的吧。
----摇滚藏獒
on the way go back home
me:what did you think of this animated flim?
sis:so funny, and the soundtrack was very nice,what about you?
me:well,i think so too,but it also touched my heart a little.
sis:it was just funny,how was it touching?
me:because it is a story about a personal dream and deep love
sis:eh…what‘s the meaning of the personal dream and deep love?
me:you will understand it when you grow up.
sis:eh…well
----Rock Dog
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