Letter of application (Is there any mistake?) ;s
Dear Sir or Madam
I have just seen the advertising for jobs on the internet and I would like to submit an application for the job. I am a 22-year-old Peruvian with energy and cheerfulness. I have always wanted to meet people from different countries and your job seems the perfect opportunity.
Although I have never worked as a tour guide before, I have worked in my university as a student guide for fresh year students for 5 months. I am knowledgeable in English at an advanced level, as I have been attending classes for the last 2 years. I would like to add that I have visited different parts of Peru and I could talk with locals confidently during the journey.
As for other personal qualities, I have been always fascinated about America history and geography, so explaining the people about it would not be a problem.
I am looking forward to get a response as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
Alexis Vega
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I just saw your advertisement to become a tour guide and I would like to submit an application for the job. I am an entergetic and cheerful 22-year-old Peruvian native. I have always wanted to meet people from different countries and your job seems like the perfect opportunity.
Although I have never worked as a tour guide before, I worked as a student guide for freshman students at my university for 5 months. I am knowledgeable in English and I am very fluent, as I have been attending classes for the last 2 years. I would like to add that I have visited different parts of Peru and I can talk with locals confidently.
As for other personal qualities, I have been always fascinated about American history and geography, so explaining that to people wouldn't be a problem.
I am looking forward to getting a response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Alexis Vega
I just saw your advertisement to become a tour guide and I would like to submit an application for the job. I am an entergetic and cheerful 22-year-old Peruvian native. I have always wanted to meet people from different countries and your job seems like the perfect opportunity.
Although I have never worked as a tour guide before, I worked as a student guide for freshman students at my university for 5 months. I am knowledgeable in English and I am very fluent, as I have been attending classes for the last 2 years. I would like to add that I have visited different parts of Peru and I can talk with locals confidently.
As for other personal qualities, I have been always fascinated about American history and geography, so explaining that to people wouldn't be a problem.
I am looking forward to getting a response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Alexis Vega
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Letter of application (Application Letter) (Are there any mistakes?) ;s
Dear Sir or MadamI have just seen the advertisement for jobs on the internet and I would like to submit an application for the job. I am a 22-year-old Peruvian with energy and cheerfulness. (I am an energetic and cheerful 22 year-old Peruvian.) I have always wanted to meet people from different countries and your job seems (like) the perfect opportunity.
Although I have never worked as a tour guide before, I have worked in my university as a student guide for first year students for 5 months. I am knowledgeable in English at an advanced level, as I have been attending classes for the last 2 years. I would like to add that I have visited different parts of Peru and I could talk with locals confidently during the journey.
As for other personal qualities, I have always been fascinated by/with American history and geography, so explaining the it to people about it would not be a problem.
I am looking forward to getting a response as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Alexis Vega
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Letter of application (Is there any mistake?) ;s
Dear Sir or MadamI have just seen the advertising for jobs on the internet and I would like to submit an application for the job. I am a 22-year-old Peruvian with energy and cheerfulness. I have always wanted to meet people from different countries and your job seems the perfect opportunity.
Although I have never worked as a tour guide before, I have worked in my university as a student guide for fresh year students for 5 months. I am knowledgeable in English at an advanced level, as I have been attending classes for the last 2 years. I would like to add that I have visited different parts of Peru and I could talk with locals confidently during the journey.
As for other personal qualities, I have been always fascinated about with America American history and geography, so explaining it to the people about it would not be a problem.
I am looking forward to getting a response as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
Alexis Vega
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