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Celebrations The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. Do you agree or disagree? My essay: People have different views about whether public expenditure should be spent on national celebrations such as new year, festivals or not. While I agree that governments and individuals are spending an significant amount of money on those celebrations, I believe this activity is considered necessary and acceptable. On the one hand, a large number of grants are currently spent on some important celebrations around the world. Firstly, government spends their budget holding some big events to celebrate those occasions. For example, much money is being paid for fireworks on New Year's eve in many countries. Secondly, individuals also use lots of their money for these events, which is a habit of many families all over the world. For instance, all members of my family usually go home and have special dinner on the final day of every year. However, I believe there are many benefits we had gained from spending money on celebrating these events. The main advantage is that community pride will be boosted related to these occasions. It provoke the awareness of current generations about history and therefore they will understand, aspire their nation more. In addition, attendants will probably broaden their mind during these events. They will gain more knowledges and understandings about history, tradition or culture, ...Moreover, through these times, they also can preserve their national culture by wearing traditional clothes or singing national anthem,...Last but no least, this is also the only times when relatives from everywhere can come home and have fun together, it is understandable that people would want to spend money on things make them happy. In conclusion, thesedays there are a lot of money that people spend on celebrations but we cannot deny the own benefits of it.

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Celebrations

The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year New Year's or other festivals. Do you agree or disagree?
My essay:
People have different views about whether public expenditure funds should be spent on national celebrations such as new year, New Year's  or  other festivals, or not. While I agree that governments and individuals are spending an significant amount of money on those celebrations, I believe this activity is considered necessary and acceptable.

On the one hand, a large number of grants are currently spent on some important celebrations around the world. Firstly, the government spends their its budget holding some big events to celebrate those occasions. For example, much money is being paid for fireworks on New Year's eEve in many countries. Secondly, individuals also use lots a lot  of their money for these events, which is a habit of many families all over the world. For instance, all members of my family usually go home and have a special dinner on the final day of every year.

However, I believe there are many benefits we had gained from spending money on celebrating these events. The main advantage is that community pride will  can be boosted related to these occasions. It provoke encourages the awareness of current generations about history and therefore they will understand(, aspire it's unclear what you mean by aspire in this case) their nation more. In addition, attendants will probably broaden their minds during these events. They will gain more knowledges and understandings about history, tradition orand culture, ....Moreover, through these times, they also can preserve their national culture by wearing traditional clothes or singing national anthems. ,...Last but not least, this is also the only times when relatives from everywhere can come home and have fun together,, it It is understandable that people would want to spend money on things make them happy.

In conclusion, these days there are is a lot of money that people spend on celebrations but we cannot deny the own benefits of it.

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