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Save the endangered animals Every year, people kill thousands of wild animals for their fur. It's cruel of them to do so. In order to eat great food, some people catch the endangered animals to sell. These causes the population of wild animals get smaller and smaller. In a word, wild animals are fashion victims! Tell me why! Why must you catch the fashion? Remember: No buying, no killing. We must save the endangered animals. They are also the members of the Earth. We live in a same sky, a same land, a same planet! Let's move up and do our best to protect wild animas and save the endangered animals. Please!

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Save the endangered animals

Every year, people kill thousands of wild animals for their fur. It's cruel of them to do so. In order to eat great food, some people catch the endangered animals to sell. This causes the population of wild animals to get smaller and smaller. In a word(Basically\ or other things, I wouldn't use "In a word" though. It sounds unnatural to me), wild animals are fashion victims (better victims of fashion)! Tell me why! Why must you catch the fashion be fashionable? Remember: No buying, no killing. We must save the endangered animals. They are also the members of the Earth. We live in the same sky,the same land, and the same planet! Let's move up* and do our best to protect wild animals and save the endangered animals, please!

*This sounds weird to me, but I'm not sure what to replace it with. Maybe "Let's keep going"

Good job!

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Go vegan haha
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I'm looking forward someone to correct. :)

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