Friday Diary
I woke up at 11 a.m. and I made Indian curry, it was a little bit sour than I thought. I ate it and I went to work. It was busy because of Friday evening, but we had plans to go to Salamanca's whisky bar. So after closed our restaurant, we were very quickly to finish our job. When we finished to work, a staff member pic us up to there. And I saw her boyfriend at the first time.
Then, I met university school teacher. We talked about Japanese job hunting. I'm still university student, since I listened carefully to what he told me. I had a good time.
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Friday Diary
I woke up at 11 a.m. and (only need one subject) made Indian curry, it was a little bit sourer (comparative form) than I'd hoped for (verb choice and tense). I ate it and (only need one subject) went to work. It was a busy Friday evening (phrasing), but I didn't mind, we had plans to go to Salamanca's whisky bar afterwards. We finished up quickly at work and closed the restaurant. (order of phrasing) ... picked us up outside work and I met (verb choice) her boyfriend for (preposition choice) the first time.Then (where?! Outside the restaurant?), I met university school teacher. We talked about Japanese job hunting. I'm still university student you see (explaining phrase), so (reasoning word choice) I listened carefully to what he told me. I had a good time.
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Friday Diary
I woke up at 11 a.m. and I made Indian curry, it was a little bit sour than I thought. I ate it and I went to work. It was busy because of Friday evening, but we had a plan to go to Salamanca's whisky bar. So after closing our restaurant, we went to quickly finish our job. When we finished our job, a staff member picked us up to there. And I saw her boyfriend for the first time.
Then, I met a university school teacher. We talked about Japanese job hunting. I'm still a university student(comma is not required)so I listened carefully what he was telling me. I had a good time.
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