Animals in danger of extinction
Nowadays more and more animals are becoming extint around the world. I really believe that we should analyse why it happens and resolve those problems for protecting them.
Pollution is the reason for global warming, which causes the destruction of many animals' habitat. The blame it falls on the humans, who are polluting constantly. As a result of this the icy parts in the North and South are melting, so penguins and polar bears are losing their home. We should throw out less gasses to the atmosphere and start recycling more.
These days, many wild animals are being hunted due to people like their fur for making clothes, specially coats. Furthermore, there are poeple who collect stuffed animals' heads. I think it shouldn't be allowed to use clothes with that fur.
Also, our planet si suffering from cutting down the trees and the resultant destruction of forest for creating more places for construction. So, animals are losing their habitat again.
From my point of view all these problems have solutions and we have to find out it for protecting endangered animals due to all animals are really important in the alimentary chain.
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Animals in danger of extinction
Nowadays more and more animals are becoming extint around the world. I really believe that we should analyse why it happens and resolve those problems for protecting them.Pollution is the reason for global warming, which causes the destruction of many animals' habitat. The blame falls on the humans, who are polluting constantly. As a result of this the icy parts in the North and South are melting, so penguins and polar bears are losing their home. We should throw out less gasses to the atmosphere and start recycling more.
These days, many wild animals are being hunted due to people like their fur for making clothes, specially coats. Furthermore, there are poeple who collect stuffed animals' heads. I think it shouldn't be allowed to use clothes with that fur.
Also, our planet is suffering from cutting down the trees and the resultant destruction of forest for creating more places for construction. So, animals are losing their habitat again.
From my point of view all these problems have solutions and we have to find out it for protecting endangered animals due to all animals are really important in the alimentary chain.
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Animals in danger of extinction
Nowadays more and more animals are becoming extinct around the world. I really believe that we should analyse why it happens and resolve those problems for protecting them.Pollution is the reason for global warming, which causes the destruction of many animals' habitat. The blame for it falls on
These days, many wild animals are being hunted due to people liking/using their fur for making clothes, especially coats. Furthermore, there are poeple who collect stuffed animals' heads. I think using fur to make clothes shouldn't be allowed.
Also, our planet is suffering from the cutting down of trees and the resultant destruction of forests for creating more places for construction. So, animals are losing their habitat in these types of land as well (3).
From my point of view all these problems have solutions and we have to find out what they (refiere a soluciones) are in order to protect endangered animals due to the fact that (4) all animals are really important in the alimentary chain.
1 put out. mejore que throw out, pero toadavia hay una major manera de decirlo, no obstante, no lo se
2 gas- esta palabra puede ser plural (gases) pero aqui creo el uso de singular es mejor.
3- again - raro. as well = muy similar con "also". Te doy una sugerencia.
4- due to - si "due" introduce una frase , necesitas "due to the fact that"..... Como en espanol, dices debido a las inundaciones (punto). Pero dices "debido a que las inundaciones han destruido todas las casas....."
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Wow your english is perfect, good job!!
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