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English speaking people! Please help to correct mistakes!!! January 5, 2013 Saturday New Year already passed. We have met it very nice in Brest. Olivia wrote SMS to her friends. I do it too. Kristin laid the table. Mum read the book and dad with Juchnik watched the concert on TV. We sit behind the table. Watch strike 12 o'clock. Olivia hurry us in order to we fill the wine to all and I ripen the juice for me. I make a wish. On the whole it was funny. Then we ate the cake , but I didn't eat even first piece. So before it I ate salad "Olivie", mashed potatoes and rissoles. Olivia present me brilliant pens, Christmas toy, notebook and lustre for lips.

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English speaking people! Please help to correct mistakes!!!

January 5, 2013
Saturday

New Years has already passed. We have had a nice time in Brest. Olivia texts her friends, as do I. Kristin sat the table and mom read a book while dad and Juchnik watched the concert on TV. We sat behind the table while we watched the clock strike 12. Olivia hurried over to us in order to refill our wine. I made a wish. Overall it was very fun. Then we had cake, but I didn't eat any because before that I had Olivie salad, mashed potatoes and rissoles. Olivia presented me brilliant pens, Christmas toys, notebook, and luster for my lips.
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English speaking people! Please help to correct mistakes!!!

January 5, 2013
Saturday

New Year already passed. We have met it very nice in Brest. Olivia wrote SMS to her friends. I do it too. Kristin laid the table. Mum read the book and dad with Juchnik watched the concert on TV. We sit behind the table. Watch strike 12 o'clock. Olivia hurries us in order to we fill the wine to all and I ripen the juice for me. I make a wish. On the whole, it was funny. Then we ate the cake , but I didn't eat an even first piece. So before it, I ate salad "Olivie", mashed potatoes and rissoles. Olivia present me brilliant pens, Christmas toy, notebook and lustre for lips.

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