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We Need to Protect the Earth When in the 1980s, a few people started to demand their governments, that they wanted new laws to protect the environment, nobody could think it was the beginning of something very important, which it is getting to balance the development of mankind. It was in United Stated, in the early twentieth century when first time men created the national parks. They wished to protect plants and animals, but especially they wanted to take care of their habitats. Nowadays, people all over the world are gathering in ecologic movements. These groups have managed become in politics party. Some decades ago, people did not recycle their garbage, today more and more are recycling their papers, tins and crystal’s bottles, and if they continue making these efforts they will probably recycle everything they can buy. People who live in big cities, prefers to ride their bikes than drive their cars for going to work, if they keep sustaining these good customs, they will be able to breathe fresh and pure air instead of dirty one. If parents at home and teachers at school, keep teaching children who to protect the environment, they will live in a better world. However, if mankind do not fight against the pollution and do not protect the oceans and rainforest, those children will grown in a worse world.

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We Need to Protect the Earth

When in the 1980s, a few people started to demand new laws to protect the environment from their governments, nobody thought it was the beginning of something very important, which it is getting to balance the development of mankind.


It was in United Stated, in the early twentieth century when men first time men created the national parks. They wished to protect plants and animals, but they especially wanted to take care of their habitats.


Nowadays, people all over the world are gathering in ecologic movements. These groups have managed to become in political parties. (managed to form political parties) Some/Several/A few decades ago, people did not recycle their garbage, but today more and more people are recycling their papers, tins and glass bottles, and if they continue making these efforts they will probably recycle everything they can  buy.
People who live in big cities, prefers to ride their bikes rather than driving their cars for going to work, if they keep sustaining these good customs, they will be able to breathe fresh and pure air instead of smog.
If both parents at home and teachers at school keep teaching children how to protect the environment, they will live in a better world. However, if mankind does not fight against the pollution and does not protect the oceans and rainforest, those/our children will grown in a worse world.


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