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I remember I laugh twice during sleeping, it was weird. I woke up at 9 a.m. but I slept again. After two hours later, I got up and took a shower. I was able to refresh, then I studied English. I made a Japanese food called "Oyako don" it means chicken and eggs are parents and children, so this dish is "parents and children don". It is a little bit strange but I didn't think so when I lived in Japan. I went to work and went to get the luggage to the next candy shop. We don't open in the morning but some luggage come in the morning. So they receive some luggage instead us. It so kind of the staffs. I had to bring up with the stares but the luggage was so heavy, since it was so hard. Yesterday, we were understaffed, so it was a little bit busy. However, I thought I was getting better to make meals! When we finished work, we drunk a beer and ate "Sashimi". He pic me up. Then, I watched the game of tennis because my roommate Liam likes watching sports, after that, we watched two episodes of "LOST". We almost finish to watch all episodes of season1. I can't wait to watch the next episode!!
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I remember I laughlaughing twice duringwhile sleeping, it was weird. I woke up at 9 a.m. but I slept again. After Two hours later(later already indicates that it happened after, so the word "after" becomes redundant.), I got up and took a shower. I was able to refresh, then I studied English. I made a Japanese fooddish called "Oyako don" it means chicken and egg are parent and child, so this dish is "parent and child don". It is a little bit strange but I didn't think so when I lived in Japan. I went to work and went to get the luggage(not sure what you meant here, I'm going to guess it's some sort of package(s))packages tofrom the next door candy shop. We don't open in the morning but some luggagepackages come in the morning. So theythe candy shop receives some luggagethe packages instead of us. It is so kind of their staffs. I had to carry the package up the stairs, bring up with the stares but the luggagepackage was so heavy, since it was so hard. Yesterday, we were understaffed, so it was a little bit busy.0
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I remember I laugh twice during sleeping, it was weird. I woke up at 9 a.m. but I slept again. After two hours later, I got up and took a shower. I was able to refresh, then I studied English. I made a Japanese food called "Oyako don" it means chicken and eggs are parents and children, so this dish is "parents and children don". It is a little bit strange but I didn't think so when I lived in Japan. I went to work and went to get the luggage to the next candy shop. We don't open in the morning but some luggage come in the morning. So they receive some luggage instead us. It so kind of the staffs. I had to bring up with the stares but the luggage was so heavy, since it was so hard. Yesterday, we were understaffed, so it was a little bit busy. However, I thought I was getting better to make meals! When we finished work, we drunk a beer and ate "Sashimi". He pic me up. Then, I watched the game of tennis because my roommate Liam likes watching sports, after that, we watched two episodes of "LOST". We almost finish to watch all episodes of season1. I can't wait to watch the next episode!!0
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I remember I laugh twice during sleeping, it was weird. I woke up at 9 a.m. but I slept again. After two hours , I got up and took a shower. I was able to refresh, then I studied English. I made a Japanese food called "Oyako don" it means chicken and eggs are parents and children, so this dish is "parents and children don". It is a little bit strange but I didn't think so when I lived in Japan. I went to work and went to get the luggage to the next candy shop. We don't open in the morning but some luggage come in the morning. So they receive some luggage instead us. It so kind of the staffs. I had to bring up with the stares but the luggage was so heavy, since it was so hard. Yesterday, we were understaffed, so it was a little bit busy. However, I thought I was getting better to make meals! When we finished work, we drunk a beer and ate "Sashimi". He pic me up. Then, I watched the game of tennis because my roommate Liam likes watching sports, after that, we watched two episodes of "LOST". We almost finish to watch all episodes of season1. I can't wait to watch the next episode!!0
Thank you very much!!
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Your English is very good! The only big problem I see is the word luggage. Luggage is what you travel with!
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