English speaking people! Please help to correct mistakes for my best friend!!!
Diary of Anna Golecka.
December 23, 2012
Monday
My aunt give me this diary in New Year. I was very glad. Now I lie on the bed and see TV. Holidays. We will be triping in Brest to celebrate New Year. I finished this quarter on average mark 8.9. It is not bad. I have three 7 mark and seven 10 mark. Now I am so good! Holidays. Winter. And computer too. On the whole I even don't know about to write. Maybe something about Makar? Now I very angry on him. And I don't know why. I try to show him my whims. But it's all the same I don;t like him. By the way I already have 2 diary. It is second. I keep their on turn. On the whole to write nothing. Boredom. If you didn't read my second diary I write information about me here:
My name is Anna. I am 12 years old. I was born in Nowember. I live on pervomayskaya street in 152 house. My parents build a new house for our family. I study at school № 2 , 7A class. I live in Mogilev. I have 9 persons in my class. 1 - Agata is my best friend in class. 2 - Jusef is my best boyfriend. 3 - Jilia is my friend. All in my class tease her. All except me. But she really stuiped. 4. It is I. 5. Jane. She is my rival and my main enemy. We are two excellent puple, so we compete. 6. Makar is a boy, who love me. 7. Lissi. We are not friends and I never assciate with Lissi. But If we begin to say in a simiar way snap with each other. 9. Edvard. I don't like him most of all boys. He always wriggle and says that I blush in the presence of Makar. It is my class. In addition to my parents. My mum is Swana and my dad is Wager. Naz Elmas is my favourite aktriss. Be brief you know a lot about me. Now 18. 25. oklok. I include my favourite film and will be enjoy.
In next time I written.
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English speaking people! Please help to correct mistakes for my best friend!!!
Diary of Anna Golecka.December 23, 2012
Monday
My aunt gave me this diary on New Years. I was very glad. Now I lie on the bed and see watchTV. Holidays. We will be triping traveling in Brest to celebrate the New Year. I finished this quarter on with the average mark 8.9. It is not bad. I have three 7 marks and seven 10 marks. Now I am so good! Holidays. Winter. And computer too. On the whole I even don't know about to write. I don't even know what to write about.Maybe something about Makar? Now I am very angry on him. And I don't know why. I try to show him my whims. But it's all the same I don't like him. By the way I already have 2 diaries. It is second. I keep their on turn. On the whole to write nothing. Boredom. If you didn't read my second diary I wrote information about me there:
My name is Anna. I am 12 years old. I was born in November. I live on pervomayskaya street in 152 house. My parents built a new house for our family. I study at school № 2 , 7A class. I live in Mogilev. I have 9 persons people in my class. 1 - Agata is my best friend in class. 2 - Jusef is my best boyfriend. 3 - Jilia is my friend. All the people in my class tease her. All except me. But she really stupid. 4. It is I. 5. Jane. She is my rival and my main enemy. We are two excellent pupils, so we compete. 6. Makar is a boy, who loves me. 7. Lissi. We are not friends and I never associate with Lissi. But If we begin to say in a similar way snap with each other. 9. Edvard. I don't like him most of all boys. He always wriggles and says that I blush in the presence of Makar. It is my class. In addition to my parents. My mum is Swana and my dad is Wager. Naz Elmas is my favorite actress Be brief you know a lot about me. Now 18. 25. o'clock. I include my favorite film and will be enjoy.
In next time I written. Until next time I write
Good bye!
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