Becoming a vegan
Last year my wife decided to become a vegan so we had a long discussion on this subject. I was wondering whether she was going to eat eggs and diary and give up on eating animal-by products, etc. I also was afraid she would have a vitamin or mineral deficiency and stuff like that. She told me that she was absolutely aware of the consequences that could be and she was going to guard against each and every food temptation. What was the reason of becoming a vegan? She told me it was the ethical thing to do. I reacted right away asking her how about animal-derived products like leather clothes and footwear since she really liked quality items of clothing. She didn't expect to find so many restrictions. It seemed to me she started to have second thoughts. She is a strong and persistant person who would never refuse of her obsessive ideas so she did make her mind to become a vegan. It had been 6 months since she gave up. I hope it will never happen again because while she was on this diet something wrong was with her health. Moreover, it was extremely difficult to go shopping and cook dinner with her...
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Becoming a vegan
Last year my wife decided to become a vegan so we had a long discussion on this subject (or "about it"). I was wondering whether she was going to eat eggs and diary dairy, and give up on (or stop eating) eating animal-by products, etc. I also was afraid she would have a vitamin or mineral deficiency and stuff like that. She told me that she was absolutely aware of the consequences that could be and she was going to guard against (or "resist") each and every food temptation. What was the her reason of for becoming a vegan? She told me it was the ethical thing to do. I reacted right away asking her how what about animal-derived products like leather clothes and footwear since she really liked quality items of clothing. She didn't expect to find so many restrictions. It seemed to me she started to have second thoughts. She is a strong and persistent (or "tenacious") person who would never refuse ("let go") of her obsessive ideas, so she did make up her mind to become a vegan. It has been 6 months since she gave up being a vegan. I hope it will never happen (or "I hope she won't try veganism again") again because while she was on this diet something wrong was with it negatively affected her health. Moreover, it was extremely difficult to go shopping and cook dinner with (or "for") her...2
Becoming a vegan
Last year my wife decided to become a vegan so we had a long discussion on about this subject. I was wondering whether she was going to eat eggs and diary and give up on eating animal-by products, etc. I also was afraid she would have a vitamin or mineral deficiency and stuff like that. She told me that she was absolutely aware of the potential consequences that could be and she was going to guard against each and every food temptation. What was the reason of for becoming a vegan? She told me it was the ethical thing to do. I reacted right away by asking her how what she thinks about animal-derived products like leather clothes and footwear since she really liked quality items of clothing. She didn't expect to find so many restrictions. It seemed to me she started to have second thoughts. She is a strong and persistent person who would never refuse of her obsessive ideas change her mind once she has made a choice, so and she did make up her mind to become a vegan. ( <---this sentence doesn't really make sense, how I corrected it is what I thought the meaning was, but the next sentence doesn't follow with that idea. So saying something like, "She is a very strong and persistent person, and even though she decided to be a vegan, she did eventually change her mind.") It had has been 6 months since she gave up. I hope it will never happen again because while she was on this diet something wrong was with her health. Moreover, it was extremely difficult to go shopping and cook dinner with her...Overall this is actually very well written!
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Becoming a vegan
Last year my wife decided to become a vegan so we had a long discussion on this subject. I was wondering whether she was going to eat eggs and dairy and give up on eating animal based products, etc. I was also afraid she would have a vitamin or mineral deficiency and other problems. She told me that she was aware of the consequences and would take care to eat a properly balanced diet. What was the reason for becoming a vegan? She told me it was the ethical thing to do. I asked her what about animal-derived products like leather clothes and footwear since she really liked quality items of clothing. She wasn't aware there would be so many restrictions. It seemed to me she started to have second thoughts. She is a strong willed person who would never change her mind and so she did become a vegan. It has been 6 months since she gave up. I hope she doesn't go back to being a vegetarian again, because while she was on the diet it affected her health. Moreover, it was extremely difficult to go shopping and cook dinner with her...Want to progress faster?
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