Some words about my hobby
I'd like to write about my hobby. This is not just hobby, I can call it "my way of life".
A couple of years ago I was interested in healthy food and healthy living. I read numbers of books and articles about dietology, organic foods, sport and activity. It was my passion. I refused fast-food, fat meat, wheaten flour and semi-finished products. Later I started to eat non-gluten foods.
My family followed me. My husband made up his mind to lose weight and ask me to help him. I made the meal plan for him and he lost about 12 kilos during 4 months. I'm very proud of him!
Now I'd like to help people to become more healthy. If my friends ask me about their nutrition I really enjoy to be useful. I try to explain the basic principles of healthy life and made a meal plan if they would like.
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Some words about my hobby
I'd like to write about my hobby. This is not just a hobby, I can call it "my way of life".A couple of years ago I was interested in healthy food and healthy living. I read numbers of books and articles about dietology, organic foods, sport and activity. It was my passion. I refused to eat fast-food, fatty meat, wheaten flour and semi-finished products. Later I started to eat non-gluten foods. ( non-gluten makes sense, but usually we say "gluten-free" foods)
My family followed me. My husband made up his mind to lose weight and asked me to help him. I made a meal plan for him and he lost about 12 kilos during 4 months. I'm very proud of him!
Now I'd like to help people to become more healthy. If my friends ask me about their nutrition I really enjoy to be useful being useful / making myself useful. I try to explain the basic principles of a healthy life and made make a meal plan if they would like one /me to do that.
Good work Yekaterina, I've put the corrections in blue and underlined them, with some extra suggestions of what you could say.
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Some words about my hobby
I'd like to write about my hobby. This is not just hobby, I can call it "my way of life".A couple of years ago I was interested in healthy food and healthy living. I read numbers of books and articles about dietology, organic foods, sport and activity. It was my passion. I refused fast-food, fat meat, wheaten flour and semi-finished products. Later I started to eat non-gluten foods.
My family followed me. My husband made up his mind to lose weight and ask me to help him. I made the meal plan for him and he lost about 12 kilos during 4 months. I'm very proud of him!
Now I'd like to help people to become more healthy. If my friends ask me about their nutrition I really enjoy to be useful. I try to explain the basic principles of healthy life and made a meal plan if they would like.
My hobby,
A couple of years ago I was interested in healthy food and healthy living. I read numbers of books and articles about dietology, organic foods, sport and activity. It was my passion. I refused ( to eat) fast-food, fat (fatty) meat, wheaten flour and semi-finished products. Later I started to eat non-gluten ( gluten free) foods.
My family followed me. My husband made up his mind to lose weight and (asked) me to help him. I made (a) meal plan for him and he lost about 12 kilos during 4 months. I'm very proud of him!
Now I'd like to help people to become more healthy. If my friends ask me about their nutrition I really enjoy to be useful ( am very happy to help them). I try to explain the basic principles of healthy life ( living) and made a meal plan if they would like. (make a meal plan if they require one.)
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