Corrections · 2
Things that have happened lately
(Another way to say this: "Recent Events")
Hello.This time I'm gonna I'd like to tell you my recent days.
I'm a university student, so I'm studying at school almost every day. After school I sometimes have a part-time job. I work at hotel as a housekeeper.
Till 2 Until two weeks ago I was so busy that I couldn't do anything for fun. But now I have lots
of things going on again and I feel stressed x.x
During the summer holidays, I hope I can go somewhere (fun? relaxing?).
Notes:
Like Ed said in his correction, "I'm gonna" is very informal. It's okay when you're talking to someone, but normally we don't write it.
"But now I have lots of things going on . . ." I added some words to this sentence to make it flow better. But it's still very informal. Instead of "lots" you can say "a lot." The expression "things going on" means that there is a lot of activity.
I hope this helps! お休みなさい!
Things that have happened lately
Hello.This time, I'm gonna (this is informal - it is better to use "I shall" if you're going for a formal tone) tell you about the past few days.
I'm a uni student, therefore I'm studying at school almost every day. After school, I occasionally have a part-time job. I work at a hotel as a housekeeper.
Until 2 weeks ago, I was so busy that I couldn't do anything for fun.
But I have lots of responsibilities/obligations again and now I feel stressed x.x
During summer holidays, I hope I can go somewhere. (I would say: I hope I can go somewhere during the summer holidays.)
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