MY MOBILE PHONE BROKE UP Hello everyone! I'll talk to about my day. My day was very tired, but it was productive! I woke up at 9:00am then i went to work. My job is cool, because i work at agency of

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MY MOBILE PHONE BROKE UP Hello everyone! I'll talk to about my day. My day was very tired, but it was productive! I woke up at 9:00am then i went to work. My job is cool, because i work at agency of travel. I sell travel package for many kind of people. I have a goal and I need achieve it every month. Because every day I arrive tired in my house. in the end day my mobile phone broke up. :( I Have had this one a long time, but now i need buy another. PS: Please guys, help me about my mistakes in this note. Thank you so much!

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MY MOBILE PHONE BROKE UP

broke up = used most commonly when you're talking about partners (ie. boyfriend and girlfriend).

"I broke up with my girlfriend over a stupid mistake."

"You often read in tabloids about celebrities, who have broken up with their partners."

Hello, everyone! I'll talk to about my day.
My day was very tiring, but it was productive!
I woke up at 9:00am then I went to work.

My job is cool because I work at a travel agency. agency of travel.

I sell travel packages to diverse groups of people. I have a goal and I need to achieve it each month. Therefore, every day I arrive home tired. in my house.
At the end of today, my mobile phone broke. :( I have had this one for a long time, but now I need to buy another.

PS: Please guys, help correct my mistakes in this notebook entry.

Thank you so much!

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Hello everyone! I'll I am going to talk to you about my day.
My day was very tired exhausting, but it was productive! But still productive.
I woke up at 9:00am, then i went to work. My job is cool because i work at a travel agency agency of travel. I sell travel packages for to many kinds of people. I have an objective that goal and I need achieve I have to fufill every month. Because every day I arrive tired in my house. I am typically very tired when I get back home from the work.
in at the end of the day, my mobile phone broke up down. :( I Have had this one for a long time, but now i need to buy another one.

PS: Please guys, help me about with my mistakes in this note.

Thank you so much!

MY MOBILE PHONE BROKE UP

Hello everyone! I'll talk to about my day.
My day was very tired tiring, but it was productive!
I woke up at 9:00am then i I went to work. My job is cool, because i I work at a travel agency of travel. I sell travel packages for to many kinds of people. I have a goal and I need to achieve it every month. Because of this every day I arrive home tired in my house.
in At the end of the day my mobile phone broke up. :( I Have had this one a long time, but now i I need to buy another.

PS: Please guys, help me about with my mistakes in this note.

Thank you so much!

Very good writing! Parabens!

Break = quebrar - My television broke yesterday. Now I need a new one.

Break up = fragmentar / terminar um relacionamento - The meteor broke up as it entered the atmosphere. / My girlfriend broke up with me yesterday.

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