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eid mobarek In this happy day I wish every Muslim in the world Eid Mubarak and that God accepts them fasting of Ramadan. i hope Happy day for all Muslims. Your brother Ahmed.

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Eid mobarek

On this happy day, I wish every muslim in the world, Eid Mubarak and hope that God accepts their fasting, during the month of Ramadan. I hope for happiness on this day for all muslims.


Your brother,

 

 Ahmed

 

Just a few minor errors but why exclude the non muslims? How about wishing happiness for every living being on this planet?

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